Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from
TempeReview:
Great story so far. I can't wait to find out what actually happened to McGee's father and what he's going to do now that he has a child to look after. Update with more soon, please!
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Tempe] • Date [29 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from
zafaranReview:
Oh, the plot is thickening nicely again. More, more, more, please? I like Daniel and McGee being brothers and working together, so I'm always delighted when I find that a new chapter has been posted. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
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zafaran] • Date [5 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from
SulienReview:
aaargh, I hate WIPs! This was a very interesting chapter, though. Poor Arrom, losing both of his parents before he's two.
I'm eagerly awaiting the next instalment of this story! Thanks for the update!
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Sulien] • Date [5 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from
erikthevikingReview:
Intriguing and well written.
It's nice to finally be tempted with a reasonable Ziva.
Eagerly awaiting the next installment.
Thanks
Lee
Review By [
eriktheviking] • Date [5 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from
JenwrynReview:
Oooh, very enjoyable! I've just gone and got myself an NCIS-obsession, but have been in the Gateverse for a very long time, so am having a blast reading this crossover!
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Jenwryn] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from
RevDorothyLReview:
Nice use of Ducky as a less-anxious interviewer (one without quite as much history or intense interest in getting Tim back to NCIS, so he could take a calmer, more encouraging tone with McGee).
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RevDorothyL] • Date [26 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from
erikthevikingReview:
A nice story that really develops McGee's character.
Really enjoying it and looking forward to more.
Thanks
Lee
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eriktheviking] • Date [21 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from
ShieldageReview:
--plan that would change NCIS for years to come...
And here's where 'Just Another Day' is realized as a truly ironic title :D
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Shieldage] • Date [14 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from
manicReview:
I love Atlantis!
Can't wait for Gibbs to find out that McGee ate dinner at a Major General's house, and was served steak by said General. And that he has a brother involved in a top secret project ;)
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manic] • Date [13 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from
manicReview:
I enjoyed the start of your fic. Loved McGee's reaction to Daniel in general and to Daniel knowing Jack, especially.
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manic] • Date [13 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from
BugeyedmonsterReview:
Oh, yea! Tokey Jenny! They are talking blending with a Tok'ra right? I'd love to see how Jenny and a Tok'ra get along. I'd bet they'd be great together.
(^_^)/
BEM
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Bugeyedmonster] • Date [13 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from
purrfusReview:
I've never cared for the character of Jenny Shepard, but I was shocked at her death.
The director as a Tok'ra, or a free-range Tok'ra with Jenny's background?
Looking forward to more.
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purrfus] • Date [13 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from
TheEternalPixieReview:
umm.. is it just me or did you skip some in there. I mean the writting is great but did you lose a chapter??? we were at six months and then bam a year it just kinda makes me confused.
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TheEternalPixie] • Date [13 Jun 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from
RevDorothyLReview:
Jenny with a Tok'ra symbiote? Or are we just talking hand-device cures, here? Fascinating development.
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RevDorothyL] • Date [13 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from
RevDorothyLReview:
Glad to see another update in this, and to see Tim finally get Tony to SHOW that he respects McGee as a colleague.
Review By [
RevDorothyL] • Date [12 Jun 08] • Not Rated
