Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from
springReview:
Love the chapter. I had to reread this fic (again) to remind myself about what was going on, that and I just love this fic. Willow should have known better than to touch Buffy when meditating have to wonder why she didn't think about that? I also am wondering when someone is going to mention that they CAN'T kick Buffy out because it's her home and she is the only one with a job paying any and all bills? I am so very glad that Faith hit Kennedy I really hate that girl. Oh, will the whole revaluation on the fact that Harry is related to Buffy be a shocker in the next chapter? I only ask because it seems like nobody really knows who Harry is in relation to Buffy. More soon of this wonderful fic please. (feeding the plot bunnies and the muse)
Comments from author:
Willow SHOULD have known better, but my perception of the scoobies, in general, was that they never really understood how dangerous Buffy could be. Kinda like kids and fire. They know that the fire keeps them warm, but don't really understand that you have to handle it with a degree of care and caution.
The fact that they CAN'T kick Buffy out of the house, isn't really the issue. It's more a technicality. It's the intention that counts.
Dawn and the scoobies won't notice that Harry said 'our' instead of 'her' right away, but it will be noticed after a bit.
Review By [
spring] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from
ShayleePotterMalfoyReview:
WOW i really love this so far. i hope you plan on finishing it. Cheers
Review By [
ShayleePotterMalfoy] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from
spkReview:
Ecstatic to see this update. Great chapter. I love that Faith backhanded Kennedy. :)
Review By [
spk] • Date [22 Nov 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from
GypsyDruidReview:
nice update. although I though Buffy had already told Faith about the plan to kick her out?
Comments from author:
Buffy knew and told Faith that everything led to that, but neither one knew that it was actually planned out ahead of time.
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GypsyDruid] • Date [22 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from
soulfuloneReview:
my god that was good!!!! as Ron would say "bloody brilliant, mate!!"....but over so quickly
:-(....you tease!! please grace us again very very soon!!
Review By [
soulfulone] • Date [14 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from
GreenDragonReview:
Wow! Excellent and unique ideas behind this crossover... I am thoroughly enjoying this.
And now a Hellmouth at Hogwarts? Or used to be, at any rate. Interesting twists.
Thanks for sharing.
Review By [
GreenDragon] • Date [12 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from
KnightOwlReview:
I'm happy to see an update. I liked the explanation of Buffy and Harry being brother and sister. I also liked the way Harry threatened Spike. I hope you update again soon!
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KnightOwl] • Date [12 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from
adrianbdeanReview:
I think this is one of the best btvs/hp crossovers out there right now. I immediately hate any stories where Harry is younger than everyone from btvs. I am all for AU and what not but for some reason I prefer their actual ages to be intact somewhat. I like how everything is going so far. Keep updating. I hate it when a fanfic just dies.
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adrianbdean] • Date [11 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from
imokitReview:
This is a great story!
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imokit] • Date [11 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from
springReview:
I reread this whole fic..... again. This seems to be a trend with this fic so I must ask what is up with the long delays in updating is your muse not talking to you or is real life interfering? I must again state that I love this wonderfully excellent fic and I really really really really hope that you are able to update again soon!
Review By [
spring] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude 01" from
FritolaysReview:
Great update finally ;) Cant wait to read the next one! :)
Review By [
Fritolays] • Date [19 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude 01" from
wardogReview:
This is brilliant please update soon.
i do have a question though- if harry's buffys brother and dawn is technically made from her DNA doesnt that make him het brother as well.
if so why doesnt she know him?
Comments from author:
Ok, I haven't gone into it much yet, since I'm going to do the whole 'what the hell is going on?' thing in a few chapters, but I'll gloss over a few of the main points.
After the first week or so, Buffy wasn't in the mental institution anymore (the interlude chapter). However, the workers at the institution, her parents, etc, still believed her to be there because of the PTB doing their thing.
Once Buffy comes back from England (parts of this time will be in other interludes), she got out of the institute. She never told anyone about any of it happening. So, if Dawn "grew up" with Buffy, she would've never known about Harry. After all, Buffy doesn't know that she's related to Harry until the whole England/institute thing.
So, technically speaking, while Dawn is as much Harry's little sister as she is Buffy's, she doesn't know anything about Harry.
Review By [
wardog] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude 01" from
AudioSpectrumReview:
I love your story! Thank-you so much for writing so far. I look forward to the next update!
Review By [
AudioSpectrum] • Date [19 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude 01" from
manicReview:
Buffy rolled her eyes and looked up. “You won’t have to worry about that,” she quoted, mockingly. “Thanks, Whistler
LOL! The messenger has a sense of humor! I'm enjoying the fic so far. I did find it kind of weird though, that after the fall out with everyone, Buffy still felt comfortable staying with the people who betrayed her. And vice versa.
I look forward to more.
Review By [
manic] • Date [15 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude 01" from
seraphinnReview:
This is really good. Please update soon.
Review By [
seraphinn] • Date [15 Jun 08] • Not Rated