Review of chapter "Chapter One - Xander" from
JediLaSombraReview:
Veronica/Xander is a very good pairing. Surprised more stories aren't written about them. Can't wait for more.
Review By [
JediLaSombra] • Date [19 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Xander" from
DifdiReview:
Great summary! Can't wait to read the story. Any idea when you'll post the first chapter?
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It has no dialog, it's too long to be a double-drabble, and barely establishes a scene. You've written a summary, not a story.
Comments from author:
Er that is the first chapter you've just reviewed.
Review By [
Difdi] • Date [12 Dec 07] • Rating [2 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Xander" from
martelcrisReview:
A little short, but a good start.
Veronica/Xander is a good pairing, two smart mouth that promises sparkling dialogs.
Review By [
martelcris] • Date [11 Dec 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Xander" from
warReview:
good start looking forward to more.
Review By [
war] • Date [11 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Xander" from
LiastraLeeReview:
Cool! This is a pairing I never considered (if it is actually Veronica that is), but it could be seriously cool. Good start.
Review By [
LiastraLee] • Date [11 Dec 07] • Not Rated
