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GundumMReview:
like it
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GundumM] • Date [21 Apr 08] • Not Rated
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JessReview:
Fantastic! I would have loved to see his date with ChiChi though! LOL! Its a man baby!
Review By [
Jess] • Date [1 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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AfterthestormReview:
This has been a fun fic to read. I love the way all the chicks Xan's gone with have been either psychos or loonies. But, what I'd really love to see is Xander dating Chi-Chi Rodriquez.
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Afterthestorm] • Date [30 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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AomizuokoReview:
intresting! Could you turn this into a Luna and Xander fic? I rather like that idea, now that I think about it.
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Aomizuoko] • Date [29 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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FyrlocheReview:
Funny and very appropriate. Xander and Luna is actually a pretty good match. Xander has seen too many weird things to dismiss her wanting to find strange things out of hand just because they aren't supposed to exist. And Luna could really use someone who will love her unconditionally. Might ground her a little.
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Fyrloche] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ShieldageReview:
Awwww... . He'll be able to see thestrals, but she'll probably find even weirder stuff.
Secondly, Xander being caught with Amanda twice is going to look horrible if he gets arrested again.
Luna and him should make a great couple, nice to see them walking off together :)
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Shieldage] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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NightToddReview:
Chapter 7 is a good plot bunny this needs to be written up badly
Review By [
NightTodd] • Date [22 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 7" from
spanderfanReview:
Awwww. That was a slightly foreboding, yet happy ending. I hope to hear more about this couple. Both slightly ignored, both weird. **sigh** A match made in heaven.
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spanderfan] • Date [22 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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JediLaSombraReview:
That was sweet, waiting for the other shoe too fall now. heh.
Keep up the good work.
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JediLaSombra] • Date [22 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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InfinixReview:
That's exactly how Xander/Amanda was going to end I was kinda hoping she waited until the third date before she got into the high stakes larceny but as far as Amanda is concerned that was probably a great first date.
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Infinix] • Date [21 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 5" from
InfinixReview:
Hehe those are some excellent pairings. Xander/Electra could be really nice if it doesn't end in the very likely tragedy. Xander/Luna is just a really sweet pairing because he is one of the few people that could accept her as is and she the same. Xander/Amanda probably wouldn't last long but it would be undeniably hot and exciting with a splash of adventure not to mention if Xander becomes immortal his dates trying to kill him would be slightly less of a problem. Keep up the good work.
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Infinix] • Date [21 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 6" from
KirallieReview:
Poor Xander!!! He just has no luck at all with women.
Review By [
Kirallie] • Date [21 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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cwolfReview:
that would explain it. Though i never saw the spin-off series where Amanda was the main immortal....
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cwolf] • Date [20 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 5" from
AbryxisReview:
OK. Lets see if I can get this down between the hysterical fits of giggling.
In my order of preference:
1 Amanda
2 Electra
3 ChiChi
4 Luna
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Abryxis] • Date [20 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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ChiVayneReview:
Luna would seem to be the one most prepared to accept Xander and his life, so my vote is for her.
Review By [
ChiVayne] • Date [20 Dec 07] • Not Rated
