This is actually alot better then I thought it would be please update soon.

I've never read the books that this story is based on, but I started reading and couldn't stop. I love Grace as a character and her situation. I also love her relationship with Greg (so, please don't kill him off). Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

I love seeing and reading this story.
Raf

Very cool fic. I have no idea what the added series is, but its a nice read and we're getting a good feeling for grace. :)

This is great!
brilliant characterizations!
can't wait to read more!

So Far I really like what you've written, it's diffrent and I like diffrent. thanks. Keep going.

I'm not seeing much point to this story so far. You added what basically amounts to a Mary-Sue that isn't only because of the technicality of being a corpse from another series. You have implied that you don't want to make any major changes to canon which holds up to what you have done so far. You have added a bit of pointless cheerleader/social interaction that I couldn't care less about. So what is the point of the story?

Wow, I can't believe you've only gotten four reviews for this so far, even though I've never read a single book from this series you're crossing over with I must admit this makes for an awesome read. When I have caught up with my large list of books still needing to be read in my collection I'm going to look up the series you're working with here to see what's the what as it were.

Your focus on Grace allows for more peripheral characters such as the Cheerleaders in the last chapter to become involved. I wonder how Xander will react when he gets possessed by the Hyena. One Alpha against another as it were. Or perhaps that should be Werewolf. LOL

Thank you for providing a long and wonderful read, I look forward to your next update. I have no criticisms to make because it was just all good, and I'm not good at spotting mistakes unless I read it at least 5 times over. Which I might do when I have more time and a better understanding of the universe you're working with just to see if I pick up any nuances from the beginning I would have missed having never before been exposed to it. Until next time, thanks again and ciao for now. LOL

Is Grace stronger than a Slayer? If so will Buffy get stronger with time?

Please update soon as it is very good.

Nicely writtten indeed. i just have to wonder who is who (spirit wise) and am a bit wary of the lack of good tidibits about willow :/

Willow and Grace aren't going to get along for a bit. And then they do. And then they don't. It gets very complicated but all works out in the end. There will be more about the Scoobies once Grace gets settled and gets her first Change behind her. As for who Grace was all I can say is the other three were the Fates and she's a Higher Power of some degree. That actually won't be revealled until the very last chapter when they're back to where they started.

Good so far. I like the fact that she doesn't just slip seamlessly into Jesse's family. With extra eyes maybe Jesse will make it this time

No, unfortunately, Jesse still didn't make it. I considered having him survive, but it totally threw off some of the things I was writing for further down the story. But I'm very glad you like it so far.