Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
DragonelfReview:
I have just started to reread the series and I am certain that it will be just as good as the last time I read it.
::Continues reading the story::
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Brain: Are you pondering what I'm pondering?
Pinky: Whoof, oh, I'd have to say the odds of that are terribly slim, Brain.
Brain: True.
Pinky: I mean, really, when have I ever been pondering what you've been pondering?
Brain: To my knowledge, never.
Pinky: Exactly. So, what are the chances that this time, I'm pondering what you're pondering?
Brain: Next to nil.
Pinky: Well, that's exactly what I'm thinking, too.
Brain: Therefore, you are pondering what I'm pondering.
Pinky: Poit, I guess I am!
- Pinky and the Brain
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Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [19 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from
ObsidianReview:
Ok I know I'm probley not going to be popular for this but I gotta say it.
While your writing of this story is good it lacks being original enough to be a true story. All you've done is place xander as a technomage learning his magic into the story of harry potter.
And this really isn't that original and similiar things have been done, repeatedly over and over.
I would truelly love to see a story where Xander does become a Technomage and has to learn his magic. But an original story. not just one pieced together from another story.
There I've had my two cents worth. Do with it as you will.
Review By [
Obsidian] • Date [24 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from
MichelleWinchesterReview:
After reading the other reviews, I REALLY wish I had gotten to read the other version and it's sequel!!!!!
:)
As a Xander fan, I found this story very good! :) Even though I've never seen Babalon 5 or even heard of the other show *wincing in shame* I couldn't stop reading until I finished (even reading partly through my favorite show Supernatural *gasp!*).
Review By [
MichelleWinchester] • Date [11 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter three" from
lillybReview:
FYI Ron's parents visit his brother Charley in Romania at Christmas he's the one studying dragons, not a cousin. But other than that great job. I am a little worried about Xander saving Hermione from the troll that's one of the ways that she bonded with the boys. Gotta go must read more now. Luv ya.
Review By [
lillyb] • Date [14 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from
lillybReview:
wwwhat you have never read the books how can you live with your self,eeekkk! just kidding I like the story and i can ignore the errors for the sake of a good read. Keep up the good work. (and get ye to the library)
Review By [
lillyb] • Date [12 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
WolfWriterReview:
There's just one teeny problem. Cats, like dogs, shouldn't eat chocolate, as there's a chemical in it that is toxic to their systems.
I think I reviewed once before but I can't remember if I did.
Otherwise, this is a good story.
Review By [
WolfWriter] • Date [11 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from
wraithruneReview:
Nice :)
Review By [
wraithrune] • Date [31 May 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from
AnskuReview:
A bit rough around the edges but nice :)
Review By [
Ansku] • Date [12 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from
arkeusReview:
maybe i already reviewed the rewrite, but i like it like that too, though i am kind of sad there will be more Dawn than Willow (from the fanart :/)
good work!
Review By [
arkeus] • Date [21 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from
waeyReview:
Great job Methos.
Review By [
waey] • Date [17 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter three" from
VoraxReview:
I was reading through this again and came to this line:
“Change of plans, my parents decided to go and visit my cousin in Romania, he’s studying dragons.” Ron explained.
Its his brother thats in Romania studying dragons. I don't think it ever really mentioned any extended family, but there might be something in the scenes where they talk about Bill's wedding in the last books.
Review By [
Vorax] • Date [4 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from
DuskieReview:
Awesome story!
I don't know Babylon five and am kind of scared your going to send Xander bald. But very awesome Xander. Independent and strong in a very Xander like way. I like seeing a Xander with magic that isn't like, oh look, he just suddenly sprouted what everyone else had.
Can't wait to see how he handles being in a full on family environment after losing his family, as they were, and having it so completely shown what they never were, cause of coarse the Weasley's are the complete opposites if ever there was. Your going to add Ginny now! She was in your picture so I was expecting her, but there was none.(Nice pic btw looks good)
Pixel is awesome you should have more Pixel!:) Might state though her gender was male at least once.
I was wondering what made you changed your mind with Tonks you were so obviously heading for a relationship, I thought, and then it was undone. Did you just stop feeling 'it' or was it a technicality that you didn't think would work, like their ages or their personality's?
Am sad though that you got rid of the sequel even if you weren't going to continue it and are going to write a different one. Until you do, I would like to read the continuation you had. :(
Very much wishing I had read this when I first saw it now.
Am giving you usually very effective puppy-dog eyes! m0-0m Damn this digital form!
Sorry for the babble. Is sign of enjoyment.
Hope you update again.
Comments from author:
ahh, hey, sorry about the long wait for a reply...
I have plans for more of Xander at the Burrow and his interaction with the Weasley family, but it will take time as i've only just got Harry back in the plot lol
anyway, the first chapter of the next story is up now, so hope you enjoy it :D
M
Review By [
Duskie] • Date [12 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from
FrequencyQueenReview:
Excellent story! I like Xander!
Comments from author:
ahh, hey, sorry about the long wait for a reply... anyway, the first chapter of the next story is up now, so hope you enjoy it :D
M
Review By [
FrequencyQueen] • Date [6 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from
MistieMossflowerReview:
This story is excellent, I've always wanted to read more on Galen & Technomages after watching Babylon 5 & The Crusade, but I've never really come across any. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next update. ^_^
Comments from author:
ahh, hey, sorry about the long wait for a reply... the first chapter of the next story is up now, so hope you enjoy it :D
M
Review By [
MistieMossflower] • Date [1 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from
ChiVayneReview:
Did I read that right? Angelus is about to kill Willow, Xander saves her (by killing Angelus), and Buffy threatens with "He goes or I go"? And now he's wondering if she will forgive him? For what, saving his best friend? I certainly hope Willow gave Buffy a piece of her mind, given Buffy seems to be angry that Xander saved Willow at the cost of Angelus. Buffy should be the one apologizing, especially to Willow for putting Willow's life in danger. And Giles as well, for getting Jenny killed and himself nearly killed.
Review By [
ChiVayne] • Date [5 Feb 08] • Not Rated