Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from
NommaReview:
Heh. I'm liking this. Keep it up.
Review By [
Nomma] • Date [28 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from
AerynReview:
love this universe and glad to see an update for this. Hope the muse keeps inspiring you.
Review By [
Aeryn] • Date [24 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from
clarityfadesReview:
Yay for update!! :D I liked that Buffy wasn't as fine as she made out to be...& that it was Aeryn who found her & talked to her. & I was wondering how active Sineya might get if Buffy didn't get some of her pent-up energy out...glad to see she did get a little sparring in. & yay for clothes! I also liked that Aeryn was worried that nothing went wrong...does that mean they'll come back to some crisis on Moya? Can't wait to find out.
Review By [
clarityfades] • Date [24 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from
AllenPittReview:
might be neat if some of the races she encounters are 'demons' on earth and it turns out some of them come from this dimension... ie "Hey! That's an M'Fashnik! And he's molting!" or whatever.
---one thing that bugged John throughout the series: he'd enter a bar and everybody would assume he was a Sebacean PK & react accordingly. Should be fun for Buffy to experience that -
Comments from author:
Oh, I am so totally going to use that line...too good :) (Molting? bwahahahha) and yes, that is also an excellent suggestion. thanks for the suggestions, glad you liked it! love xx Shezzi
Review By [
AllenPitt] • Date [24 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Languages? Why does it have to be languages?" from
EmeraldfireReview:
Love it!!!!
Review By [
Emeraldfire] • Date [6 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Languages? Why does it have to be languages?" from
CrystalOGrapherReview:
How entertaining! I look forward to seeing where you are going with this.
By the way, the spelling of Jool's name has been bouncing around a bit within individual chapters. I think you should be consistent.
Comments from author:
i'm sorry, i thought i'd corrected it all. i'll take care of it. thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [
CrystalOGrapher] • Date [20 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Languages? Why does it have to be languages?" from
clarityfadesReview:
For a girl who struggled w/ French, I can see why Buffy'd be upset! I'm really enjoying this story...love that Buffy's being proactive in adapting to her new surroundings.
And I FLOVED her threat to Whistler...please tell me he visits & she tries to make good? Can't wait to see how Buffy, Pilot, & Moyra interact w/ each other since Buffy can sense their connection.
Review By [
clarityfades] • Date [20 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Languages? Why does it have to be languages?" from
AllenPittReview:
I had this vision of the Peacekeepers taking a real liking to Buffy (due to her being so good at fighting) with John getting lots of "gee, why can't you be more like?" or "oh, John C. must be some sort of defective earth-man", or the ever popular "Huh...I guess the Earth females are all stronger than the males, it must be a matriarchy" ---
Review By [
AllenPitt] • Date [20 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from
PieReview:
I really enjoy this fic, but as an OCD person I have to say that I'm just short of positive it's spelled Jool, because her name is Joolushko. This is by no means a negative remark on your writing, which I think is great. Please keep going!
Comments from author:
Yeah, no, that's fine...I always forget, and I am going to fix it, thank you! thanks for the review, glad you're enjoying the story! love xx Shezzi
Review By [
Pie] • Date [3 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
TheatricalBarristerReview:
Just read the first chapter, and it's a nice start. Just a quick FYI, the character's name is actually spelled 'Jool'.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I always forget that :) I'll fix it! glad you liked the chapter! love xx Shezzi
Review By [
TheatricalBarrister] • Date [2 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from
AlmadynisReview:
Really excellent start, hope you keep it up!
Comments from author:
Thanks! don't worry, I will! love xx Shezzi
Review By [
Almadynis] • Date [2 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from
WisprReview:
First time I've read this and have to say really got my attention. Glad to see Zhaan back! So far even with the AU part your characters are very well done. Can't wait for more!
Wispr
Review By [
Wispr] • Date [2 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from
AllenPittReview:
She'll be quite the mystery--Zhaan's exams should confirm that biologically she's the same race as Crichton, which should puzzle them all immensely...(plus knowing about California etc)--I like that the translate microbes don't work, it makes sense---
* Might be funny if one of the races in the Farscape universe is recognizable to Buffy as a species of 'demon'....ie not all portals go to other dimensions? ...
Review By [
AllenPitt] • Date [1 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
GypsyDruidReview:
Very cool!
oh please, oh please, oh please, tell me that at some point it'll be Buffy vs. Scorpius. That would be awesome!
Comments from author:
Well, duh, why else would someone send Buffy to the uncharteds? yeah no that is gonna be so much fun to write...it's actually gonna be a series eventually...if you have any suggestions, send me a message, huh? thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [
GypsyDruid] • Date [30 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
KiwikatipoReview:
Have Buffy marry Rigel and become an empress. Only joking.
Good start to story.
Review By [
Kiwikatipo] • Date [26 Dec 07] • Not Rated
