Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from
ElleriaReview:
Love this.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
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Elleria] • Date [30 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from
slightlyeccentricReview:
Why is it over!? This was a wonderful fic, I really hope you add more to the series. I would love to see Xander and Tony fumble their way past their inhibitions and into a relationship.
Comments from author:
Don't worry, just this fic is over. There are more fics to come... I'm only 6 fics in so far and there's a 100 prompts on the crossover100 table and then the prompts on Slash Me Twice.
There is more fumbling and relationship stuff on the way. :-)
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slightlyeccentric] • Date [29 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from
SioReview:
Very cute, I hope there is another!
~Sio
Comments from author:
Thanks! There will definitely be more on the way.
:-)
Review By [
Sio] • Date [29 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
RachelKReview:
Um... nice piece. I don't know if I care for relationships for the sake of relationships -- but I always like stories where relationships develop from frienship and respect. I still don't know the NCIS crew all that well besides Abby and the Boss, but nice, mature scenario overall.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing... :-)
Out of curiosity, have you come into this fic without reading the other 5 fics before it? I was just wondering about the 'relationships for the sake of relationships' part of your review. This is actually part of a series called the Navy Watcher that will span the time that Tony and Xander meet through them becoming roommates and then a year worth of touch and go points escalating their relationship. Their first time will be a year and a half after they meet.
I'm kind of writing them in no particular order, but if you want the complete list in written or in chronological order, visit:
http://kaylashay81.livejournal.com/47355.htmlReview By [
RachelK] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
axolotlReview:
your last minute ad campaign is impressive. Aww for Tony trying to get the like-like thing. Plus Abigail is awesome (ever watch the paurette/weatherly episode commentaries- very fun)
Comments from author:
I bought the Season 4 DVDs just for their commentary (I already had all the eps from iTunes). They are a blast together.
There's a second chapter to this that will be my last ditch ad before voting closes and we get to see Xander's side of the equation.
:-)
I had to do some thinking to keep the like-like and the like thing straight in my head. :-)
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axolotl] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
vinniebatmanReview:
hee hee, I love this series, I think I've read bits of it on LJ, but not matter what, I love it.
Can't wait for more!
~Alice~
Comments from author:
Thanks!
I'm shocked that I'm actually writing a series and making progress with it.
I've got the complete index for both written order and chronological order up on my LJ.
http://kaylashay81.livejournal.com/47355.htmlReview By [
vinniebatman] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
DemonaReview:
Woot! Confused Tony! I just love that he went to Abby to talk, cause I can just imagine how awkward that talk would have been with Gibbs and/or McGee! Yipes!!
I'm looking forward to seeing how Xander will react to his own discovery and in the future how they will come together and figure things out between them!
Thanks for another great part to this verse! :)
Comments from author:
The phone call between Xander and Dawn is going to be fun. :-)
Tony would never say anything to Gibbs about it. But there will be some kind of something in the future between the two perhaps when Xander has to go away for some kind of apocalypse or something.
Abby is the girl to talk to, especially for Tony. :-)
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Demona] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Not Rated