Review of chapter "Chapter 10: Befriending an X and avoiding the Ex's" from
BlueBooReview:
Fun fun fun til daddy takes the RV away...
Please don't let them take my RV away...
Seriously fun. please keep going. Spike makes a great cat, and a less dysfunctional Xander is definitely of the good.
blue
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BlueBoo] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: Befriending an X and avoiding the Ex's" from
ElleriaReview:
Love this. Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [
Elleria] • Date [10 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: Befriending an X and avoiding the Ex's" from
zafaranReview:
{snicker} And you don't even have to be a fan of The Sentinel to suspect something's going to go wrong. You wouldn't happen to be juggling the timeline a bit and having Xander come to visit at the same time the Sunrise Patriots did? Talk about your neighbors from Hell. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {Mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
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zafaran] • Date [5 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: Befriending an X and avoiding the Ex's" from
lorwenReview:
This was pretty funny.
Review By [
lorwen] • Date [5 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: Befriending an X and avoiding the Ex's" from
DragonelfReview:
::Feeds the plot bunny::
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Jack Napier: Have you ever danced with
the devil in the pale moonlight?
- Batman (1989)
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Dragonelf] • Date [4 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: Befriending an X and avoiding the Ex's" from
MinaLynnReview:
"the Jags..." oh I so hope that is foreshadowing of the next cross over!!!
Review By [
MinaLynn] • Date [3 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: Befriending an X and avoiding the Ex's" from
JediKnightReview:
Interesting chapter update, please post more soon.
What might the next crossover be?
Review By [
JediKnight] • Date [3 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: Befriending an X and avoiding the Ex's" from
JessReview:
Cool new update! *HUGS*
Review By [
Jess] • Date [2 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: Befriending an X and avoiding the Ex's" from
LNRReview:
Whoo Hooo! Nice one. Do I see a Sentinel crossover in the future? More Please!!!
Review By [
LNR] • Date [2 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: Befriending an X and avoiding the Ex's" from
neverwillReview:
I missed this! ...and did Xander just jinx himself with his last thought?
Comments from author:
Mmmm...maybe.
Review By [
neverwill] • Date [2 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: Befriending an X and avoiding the Ex's" from
mikerichReview:
WASHINGTON STATE HUH.seacover is in Washington state Hmmmmm.possibility's are are endless.
Review By [
mikerich] • Date [2 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Camel meet straw" from
JediKnightReview:
Interesting job on the story so far, wish some things in the C.S.I. building went better though. Please add more soon.
Review By [
JediKnight] • Date [23 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Camel meet straw" from
zafaranReview:
{snicker} It was nice to catch new chapters on this story, and this time around I'm marking it for the site's update service which I didn't know about the last time I ran across this story. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
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zafaran] • Date [8 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Camel meet straw" from
IzabelaReview:
Love this story. I hope You write more soon.
Review By [
Izabela] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Camel meet straw" from
SilvergemReview:
Lovely, it will be nice if Greg hangs around with Xander for a while for vacation until they reach Miami:) Just an idea. Looking forward to the next update:)
Review By [
Silvergem] • Date [11 Jun 08] • Not Rated