I have to start commenting at the end - because it's the last thing I read but mostly because DAWNIE!!!!! I love Dawn, love her *squishes her*, and I especially love grown up Dawn.

Again, great job with Tony and Xander and their pre-slashiness is just so fun to read. They both kinda are interested and are both not really sure about it. I think Dawn's presence will definitely have sort of effect on them, especially cause she's not going to be able to keep her mouth shut with those little comments.

And wonderful job with the Picfor1000! You rock my socks!

EDITING:
Guess I need to add that to the apartment rules; notify Tony of any long term visitors.”

“I don’t remember, honest,” Xander said, making the scout symbol with his hands.
**I think the ; should be a : - cause you are making it list thing rather than a complete sentence tacked onto another sentence, right?

And should it be "I didn't remember, honest," Xander said...? I think didn't fits better there than don't.

Love this.

I absolutely adore this series, xander & tony are a favorite pairing of mine. Not so sure I like Dawn suddenly becoming a roommate, I like the flow you've created with the guys as roommates & the little hints of more. And am looking forward to Xander interacting with Tony's team at some point. I prefer that sort of slow build to a pushy Dawn or other scoobies. For a little taste this was amusing, but maybe the visit will end up really short?

Xander and Tony have become one my fav pairings too...

On the Dawn front... Don't worry, she won't be rooming with them for the whole time and will be notable in one to two more fics. I brought her in to do a side fic in my verse for a friend who wanted a Dawn/Abby pairing. In the next fic, Dawn is going to hook up with Abby. Then the fic after that, Xander is going to realize that Dawn isn't really staying with them anymore and him and Tony will eventually find out. After that point, it goes back to Tony and Xander focused fics... Some upcoming things I'll be working with include the plague and how Xander helps Tony get through that (plus a discussion on funky diseases, since Xander had the Indian tribe curse diseases), Kate's death and then some other non-episode related things. Then I'll get to their first time which will be after the Boxed In episode.

It's still going to take Tony and Xander a year in the current timeline to work up to sleeping together... not to mention the angst that will occur the morning after...

Fangirl squee, do they have a spare bedroom or will tony and Xander need to share so dawn has a bed to sleep on?

Shirtless cuddling=adorable ^_^

Hee hee... I haven't figured out the sleeping arrangments yet. Maybe they timeshare.

I'm working on the fact that my version of Tony has a two bedroom apartment. So Xander took over one room while Tony has the other. I'm thinking that Dawn probably kicks Xander out of his room and he has to take the couch...

Couldn't resist the shirtless Xander cuddle. Their bodies know what they want. ;-)

Poor Tony.

The scoobies are really good at humiliation.

That they are.

And Tony is so cute when he's being picked on... Makes me want to cuddle him more.

Yay for Xander and Tony cuddles!! I'm really enjoying this series, I hope you add more soon.

There is more on the way. I've got so many ideas for this verse... it should be awhile before I run out.

:-)

To cute for words! Poor Tony.

~Sio

Thanks for reviewing!

So very, very shiny. I absolutely adored the use of Dawn and this glimpse of how the relationship began. It's a nice stand alone but I get the hints that this falls into a larger story. My favorite part though was Tony wincing when there's a popcorn crunch as Dawn sits down. It was a nice reminder that he and Xander were intertwined before she woke them up.

Yay! I'm actually setting it up so I can do a little sub-story or two (or more, who knows...) that Saturn asked for that is Dawn/Abby. :-)

Poor Tony is sunk... There's no escaping for him now.