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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf
Review:
I have just reread this story and I hope you will continue it.

::Feeds the plot bunny::
Comments from author:
I know it's been so long since I've posted this. I do have another chapter started, but it's not enough to post yet.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [6 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf
Review:
I hope we will see more chapters.

:: Feeds the plot bunny ::
Comments from author:
The writing for this goes slow... like an iceburg in the dead of winter.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [8 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WolfWriter
Review:
To me, Pansy was always a mean, nasty little thing who only wanted to marry Draco. But her character was never developed beyond being a Cordelia wannabe.

I'd like to see more of this story, if you care to write it.

As for the CoW, I don't think they'd care about her being a Were at all.

Just one question, since she is infected, which is stronger, the Slayer or the Wolf?
Comments from author:
The CoW, as it stood at that point in time, would have veiwed werewolves as creatures to be slayed. Now, this could be my own imaginings and when I have the time, I'll look it up, but I believe that Buffy is the one that started seeing were's as the people they were in between lunar cycles.

This happens in s7 of course, when the Bringers were killing potentials so Pansy isn't a Slayer just yet. I haven't decided which will be stronger. Each option has its own positives.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [3 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from azulkan
Review:
Interesting story. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading! and reviewing of course!
Review By [azulkan] • Date [2 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Neqs
Review:
I liked this very much. You have very interesting and original ideas. As for Pansy's characterization, she's always struck me as kind of sharp and catty. She won't be a shrinking lily, but she's very conscious of power relations.

I'm very curious to see where you go with this. The set-up at Pansy's place seemed too elaborate to just be there for upsetting her equilibrium and setting the trap, so I assume the Wizarding world think she's a back-stabbing traitor. Is Ron really dead, too? I guess I'll have to wait and see. Thanks for sharing!
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading! Everything beyond this point is vague right now. Nothing specific yet.

Thanks for the Pansy info.
Review By [Neqs] • Date [2 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from sapphire
Review:
I enjoyed this. Please continue.

Its nice to read some stories where Pansy has a brain and is making her own decisions instead of as a story based on Hermanie or Ginny.

Look forward to more
Review By [sapphire] • Date [2 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from desartartt
Review:
Good setup. I would love to see this continued. the shape changing potion was probably used by Grayback or one of his cohorts to set Pansy up?
Review By [desartartt] • Date [2 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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