Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
FiveOfFiveReview:
Really good start! I'm both totally confused and completely enthralled by what's going on here. Nice touch having Sam and Buffy flirting, while she still secretly pines for Dean, or so I'm sure he thinks. Of course if you decide to make this a nice smutty three-some I know that I for one wouldn't complain : ) Anywho, update soon, I want to know what happens next!
Side note, did you get the name for your story from the Emerson Hart, formerly of Tonic fame, song "If You're Gonna Leave"?
Comments from author:
I'm so proud of you! You're the only one that has figured that out!! :-) Yes, it is... and it's going to relate to the fic, eventually!
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FiveOfFive] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Not Rated
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spikeismineReview:
Awesome. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Comments from author:
Hopefully by Monday the 11th I'll have something for you! :-)
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spikeismine] • Date [1 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
KiwikatipoReview:
More excellent writing from you! And this story is so upbeat, well it was probably depressing for the cow's family, and what is the story with the cattle dismemberment? And why does Buffy not know Sam or visa versa, Dean obviously didn't carry around a family brag book.
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Kiwikatipo] • Date [29 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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ChloeWinchesterReview:
Ooo. I like. Can't wait til you update.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm going to try and get something done over the weekend! :-)
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ChloeWinchester] • Date [25 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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feekhReview:
Hmmm, a baddie Buffy can't sense. Interesting. And I like how you just throw in that she knows Dean.
Handy way of pulling Sam out of the running as potential love interest. Handy, as in well-written.
I am really interesting in this. Looking forward to finding out what happens next.
Nice car as well, although as a Euro-chick I had to google for pictures. :)
Comments from author:
LOL At least I gave you enough info that you COULD Google it! ;-)
I'm going to try and get an update done this weekend, hopefully!
Review By [
feekh] • Date [25 Jan 08] • Not Rated