Any chance of getting a new chapter sometime soon? I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next. Oh, that *nasty* crone in the first chapter. Treating Willow as little more than a disposable lab rat. I hope we get a chance to see her get punished for what she did since *all* of what Willow has done comes specifically back to this woman decision to conduct the experiment with Willow. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

I will try ... really but maybe august

well, i wouldn't want you to shrivel up and die, especially when you have such a good story in the making, but then again it would be interesting to watch.

I like willow's reaction to the mudblood comment - i aways found the term 'mudblood' a pathetic excuse for an insult, i mean come on, it doesn't exactly make you gasp in shock.
So is draco going to be good or evil in this fic? And when is willow going to start classes?


So i guess the only thing left to say is (clears throat): Update soon!

slowly unshrivelling - hopefully new chapter soon

Can there be more? Please? Pretty Please with Pumpkin Juice?

Ohhhhh Need more. This is so good:)

Really interesting. I'd love to read more.

Interesting, I hope you undate soon.

You may want to add in some PTSD related stuff or take it out of the intro. A good site for a summary of symptoms for PTSD is www.ptsdforums.org


I should know, I am a PTSD survivor. Its something I live with every day and, well, you kinda need to either have her use the symptoms or put her 'diagnosis to post traumatic stress (the above site will tell you the differance)

okay ... will try and work something out here thanks for site info. I am sooo sorry if this caused any offence too.

nice chappie, and yes I've seen Sweeney Todd. Ugh, I spent half the time hiding behind my scarf, because I couldn't stand the bloody murders (and I do mean the BLOODY murders. JUCK!).
The music was terrific though!

want more.... want lots more..... can i please have more?

I'm still liking the overall feel of the story but would like some exposition about Willow being 19 or 20 and in class with 16 year olds (or 15?)???

loved the chapter and the story gotta wonder how much power was taken away please update soon and i saw sweeney tood most awesome movie loved helen bohem carter

hmm .. the "correct question" ... huh? ... a little vague, so Im' not understanding where that part of the plot is going ...
But, tis good overall.

ahhhh... all will be revealed my lord ... in due course

heh---poor Draco, little knowing all his insults etc are just what she wants. A masochist is a sadist's worst nightmare, in a way--
Same problem for the instructors...while Willow will enjoy learning, she'll be indifferent to losing (or gaining) points, school spirit, quidditch, all that...might be fun if Spike shows up in the area (on his quest for a soul)--

oh yes... lets the games begin...

thnaks for reviewing

I do like the hat's parting comment. Come see me when you change your mind.

Geez
Feelin' the love in the Slytherin crowd....... not!