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EleneaReview:
Nice! I had hoped you had some more....
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Elenea] • Date [9 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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morgyairReview:
loved the whole story but really loved the last line...it was so DiNozzo
Comments from author:
The last line took me the longest. I was doing internet searches for movie quotes from vampire movies and couldn't find anything that was 'Tony' and then I went, "Duh!" and did the Buffy line.
:-)
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morgyair] • Date [3 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ElleriaReview:
Love this.
Comments from author:
:-)
Thanks!
Review By [
Elleria] • Date [3 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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SaturnReview:
I was almost afraid to read because I was afraid of spoilers. It said pre-series for both but then mentioned Ziva and I was "Oh Noes! I don't know who that is!" :) But since I finished season 2 of NCIS yesterday I figured I couldn't be afraid of being spoiled about where Kate went.
Nice fic...although I really expected the retired cop bar owner tell Tony about vampires. Not sure why though. :)
Comments from author:
I almost had the retired cop bar owner guy get a little more involved in things and then I decided that if I was ever going to finish writing it that I better not.
Just think, you're getting closer to not being spoiled by things. If you can catch up by the first part of April to the current season, you can watch them as they air. :-)
Review By [
Saturn] • Date [2 Feb 08] • Not Rated
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FiveOfFiveReview:
*Squeeee* Yay!!!
I loved it! I'm so glad you decided to have both brothers save Tony; and adding Gibbs was inspired. It's great that he and John were buddies, they're so much alike it just fits perfectly. Also loved Gibbs immediate concern when Tony announced that he'd been bitten by a vampire, and the first question for the boys after he heard about their dad was "did he get the bastard".
Wonderful characterization of everyone, all their lines were exactly what they would have said in "real life"
Comments from author:
I've got ideas for some Gibbs and John moments in the past. Just have to get them out of my head.
:-)
Review By [
FiveOfFive] • Date [1 Feb 08] • Not Rated
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axolotlReview:
Yay! This is a great companion fic, the Buffy line at the end is so Dinozzo.
Comments from author:
I was scouring google for vampire movie quotes and kept coming up dry. Then I was like, I could pull a good Buffy quote out... then I was like... why do I need a quote when he could just asked not to be called Buffy.
:-)
Glad you like! Got another one that's tentative with Gibbs and John.
Review By [
axolotl] • Date [31 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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NeviditelnyReview:
Awesome~!
Awesome awesome awesome! There's a few grammatical-y mistakes but still. AWESOME.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Yeah, my beta was in bed and I was anxious to post... Check out Demona's review and let me know if you caught something other than she did it you have the time. I always like to go back and fix errors.
:-)
Review By [
Neviditelny] • Date [31 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
DemonaReview:
Weeee!!!! You did it!!!
Oh this was just wonderful. And, and, and you managed to squeeze in Gibbs! Wheeee! It truly fills me with glee, good going.
And the voices all sounded right. And you made the Gibbs / John connection and it seemed good, natural and not forced. Woot!
You are just on a roll.
EDITING:
Before he could blink, the girl was tossed aside and the man, or whatever he was had a hold of Tony in a vice-like grip.
**put a comma after "or whatever he was" before "had a hold"
“Got attacked by a vampire. You wouldn’t happen to a thing or two about them would you, Boss?”
**happen to *know* a thing...
“John Winchester,” Gibbs finished for him. “What do mean was?”
**What do *you* mean was?
Comments from author:
:-)
Internet going out can get a person writing it seems. I woke up to snow this morning! And more on the way!!
Yeah, I set up my John/Gibbs connection. Thinking of a way to work transportation into the past story with them and John helping Gibbs out.
Thanks for the beta-ing!
Review By [
Demona] • Date [31 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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DeanieReview:
This story is just made of awesome. I love how you've woven the two worlds together.
Comments from author:
Thanks!! I really liked playing on Tony's vampire fear.
Review By [
Deanie] • Date [31 Jan 08] • Not Rated