Okay, so I suck at leaving reviews. So sorry. I have been following this story for a while, and wow! It's amazing. Totally and completely. Love it. And as an added bonus, you have turned me on to some new music. I like about anything, so when you kept saying bands I have never heard of I went over to one of my favorite sites (deezer.com, it's amazing if you don't know it) and started listening to the songs you mentioned, and wow. Love them. So color me impressed. You are an amazing person. You not only gave me a wonderful story that is amazing (and a useful distraction against college homework), but you also gave me new music to listen to(for when I actually do my homework). You are a goddess in disguise. I give you as many cookies as you can eat, with more waiting when you get hungry again. I eagerly await your next update. *hint hint*

Great chapter. I really enjoyed Anita's POV on the whole Slayer household. Dawn and Buffy interacting was fun to read as well.

1 vote for keeping the FR21 content integrated in the story. It is an Anita Blake crossover after all.

Loved the bickering

Yes, an update!!! Can't wait to see what happens, though if you could make the FR21 scenes seperate I'd really appreciate it! Write more soon!

What chapter was Anita down south for "O.Butterfly"?

Micah will be an interesting addition with how the dynamics work.
There's NO WAY that Chimera can get the pard from Buffy. Maybe he'll die sooner.
I can see Narci getting smacked down a bit more too. (Damn hyena bitch)
Are you gonna keep D & F with Marianne during NiC?

As for the FR21, personally I don't mind you getting more explicit if you think you can write it. Go for it.

Update soon!

Now that felt natural, that is the interaction of dawn, faith and buffy.

I think you have got it down pat.

I enjoyed this very much.

Thanks :)

I LOVE this update. I love the insights you gave Anita into Buffy by having all of the Buffy/Dawn interaction. I'm not always a Dawn fan but I think you are writing her character brilliantly...I especially loved the physical violence over junk food. I'm all for the FR21 rating and can't wait to see how the dynamics change with Micah's arrival. :)

Ok, I am soooo loving this fic, you have no idea. I just finished reading this through from the beginning and LOVED every minute of it. And the actors you picked to play Richard, Jean-Claude and Anita, they definitely work for the way I envisioned them. Please update soon.

Funny Buffy tortures. I like it. Thank you for all your hard work!

Woo hoo more Watching Forever!!! I like FR21 heck I wouldn't mind Buffy having a relationship with Asher and Micah. It sounds like Buffy might just end up having problems with the Ardure the way Anita did. Or was that the hint about her power finding another outlet about something else?

I like it, and though I am strictly Buffy and Buffy/Angel centric, Dawn and Faith are great side characters to be included into the dynamic. Go as high as you want.

i totally loved it....and loved that Anita got to witness this other side of Buffy....it never sat too well with me that she still struggled with seeing Buffy as one of the monsters simply b/c her understanding of Buff's powers is that she has a touch o' demon in 'er...but yah for the scooby-like interactions with Dawn and Faith!!!
And i'm all for the fr21 rating...b/c i just love me some Micha and can hardly wait to see where you take the story next!!!!!!!

I love the dawn interaction. It's fun. And I'm glad to see less movement and more moment back in the story. Can't wait for more.

I liked the Buffy/Dawn interaction...though I'm not a Dawn fan, it was a good sisterly moment for them, very realistic...I liked how Anita put it "normal-paranormal". & I liked that Anita was instantly willing to be Buffy's back up, basically. Ooh, will we see Buffy @ Quantico? Maybe not the speech itself, but some of her interaction down there? That would be kinda fun. & I like the little hints of Asher, I'd love to see more of how his & Buffy's relationship is progressing. & I'm glad Faith & Dawn are getting more lessons from Marianne...will Buffy ever be able to control the slayer within her? That could be some crazy, scary stuff. Fantastic chapter! & I'm thrilled that you finished your other story, because I love this one & can't wait to read more.

FR21 please anyone who doesn't want it can just not read those bits. Lovely chapter as always, glad we're up to NIC (next bit of spice). Are you going to keep to most of the canon for this? Micah and the others obviously not as I would expect them to join the Pard with Buffy, but with regards Anita's power, etc.? Will be interesting reading am looking forward to seeing what you come up with.
mac x