Review of chapter "On The Hogwarts Express" from
neverwillReview:
I just found this and I really love how it's going. If you're still taking votes, I'd love to see both Ginny and Harry resorted to Slytherin. Hermione should also be resorted to Ravenclaw and Luna to Slytherin (I think most of her distraction is a front, and she's really sly).
I always thought it was kind of ridiculous that they can set the students houses permanently based on their 11-year old minds. With all that's happened in the last 4 years of school, especially with the War restarting, it has affected a lot of students and they are going to be more serious about either knowledge, power, bravery, or friendship. I would think it would only help the House unity the Hat and Dumbledore want if the students had experience in other Houses so they would feel ties to more than one. At the very least, they should start resorting every 2 or 3 years (I'd go for every year, but I don't see it happening).
Hoping for more soon!
Comments from author:
I totally agree about the sorting! Hello! People change! LOL!
I'm still taking votes...will be until I actually get around to working on this one again. Not sure who, if anyone, will get resorted, though I do know Hermione won't...Mostly cos I'm gonna bash her in this, lol.
Not sure if Luna will be in this, she might be...If she is she'll definitely be friends with Harry, Draco, Ginny and Blaise, though!
I'm glad you like it so far and hopefully I'll get around to updating it soon!
~ Kyra
Review By [
neverwill] • Date [29 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "On The Hogwarts Express" from
TouchoftheWindReview:
Wow, i really like this so far, Ill get started on making you a banner at some point. I really liked the kiss, and the bits with them burning Harry's clothes...it seemed to be quite a symbolic thing to me...Harry's new 'family' watching his old life be reborn from the ashes of Harry's clothes, kinda like a phoenix and new life and all that stuff. More please!
xxx
PS i found my cup!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it! I can't wait to see what you come up with for banners!
I'm definitely glad you liked the kiss, it was my first slash kiss and I'm pretty proud of it. It's kinda hard to believe that this is the only slash I had written beforeI wrote 'Footprints In Our Hearts', isn't it?
The burning of the clothes was definitely symbolic...I thought it was something that Harry really needed to do.
Thanks for reviewing!
~ Kyra
P.S. I'm glad you found your cup!
Review By [
TouchoftheWind] • Date [23 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "On The Hogwarts Express" from
eddieReview:
awsome write more
Comments from author:
Thanks!
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eddie] • Date [10 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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DragonelfReview:
Yes you remembered it correctly it was the same actor who played both Captain Picard and Professor Xavier. The name of the actor who played both characters is Patrick Stewart.
By the way, I got more fun and/or interesting quotes posted in the blog I got listed in my profile and I am planning to add more X-Men quotes to it soon.
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Comments from author:
Cool! Go me! I'll have to check out the blog and read some of the quotes you have.
What did you think of the kiss?
Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [28 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On The Hogwarts Express" from
DragonelfReview:
I am already looking forward to read any future chapters you might get inspired to write.
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Beast: Head’s up people!! We got ourselves a spatial
anomaly that’d make Captain Picard’s head spin!!
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Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm hoping to spend the next week or so writing, hopefully I'll get at least one chapter for this done. But I make no promises.
Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [27 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "He Has A Dark Mark!!!" from
DragonelfReview:
The story is looking quite nice so far. However you might wish to translate the last word of Harry's tattoo as it is still in English.
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Beast: Head’s up people!! We got ourselves a spatial
anomaly that’d make Captain Picard’s head spin!!
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Comments from author:
Thanks! I know, that's what came up when I used an online translator. I'm gonna reword the tattoo a little bit so that the latin sounds better and doesn't have a random english word in there.
By the way, I like the quote...It makes me snicker, because doesnt the guy who played Captain Picard play Charles Xavier in the X-Men movies? So, I had to laugh. :)
Thanks for the review!
~ Kyra
Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [27 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Preparing For Diagon Alley" from
DragonelfReview:
...immediately duck as a came flying across the...
I think you missed a word between "a" and "came".
This story is looking pretty good so far.
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Beast: Head’s up people!! We got ourselves a spatial
anomaly that’d make Captain Picard’s head spin!!
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Comments from author:
Um..Oops? Thanks for pointing that out! I'll have to go fix it...Hopefully I can figureout what the missing word is supposed to be, LOL!
Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [27 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On The Hogwarts Express" from
WOLFCHILDReview:
slashy hottness overload!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
girl you just fried my circuts with the hottness of the moment.
need more DRACO/HARRY-ness quick. upload the next chappie as soon as possible. PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY, HOT FUGE, AND SPRINKELS ON TOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'll be really good and right another review.
please, please, please.
yours faithfully,
WOLFCHILD
Comments from author:
*grins* If you think that's a slashy hottness overload, you should go read my story 'Footprints In Our Hearts'!!!! Just make sure your rating filter is set to FR21! It's a BtVS/Spn crossover with a Connor/Dean pairing and about 5 or 6 pages worth of sex scene! Be prepared to have your circuits completely melted, lol!
I'll try and get the next chapter up soon, I have an idea of what I want to happen, its just a matter of writing it. Though, I'm planning on spending the next few days writing so hopefully it wont take me too long. Just to warn you though, I plan on working on the sequel to 'Footprints In Our Hearts' and 'A Charmed Slayer' first, mostly because I have more of an idea of what I want to happen in those than I do in this.
But seriously, I'm glad you liked this! And go check out 'Footprints' and let me know what you think!
Thanks for the amazing review!!!!
~ Kyra
Review By [
WOLFCHILD] • Date [26 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "On The Hogwarts Express" from
mithrilandtjReview:
Great kiss!
Can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
*grins* Thanks! I was really nervous about the kiss, I'm so glad everyone's liked it!
Thanks for reviewing!
~ Kyra
Review By [
mithrilandtj] • Date [16 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "On The Hogwarts Express" from
LeSangReview:
wow, i love this fic! please update soon!
the kiss was wonderful dont worry about it!
it's stupid late and i have class in the morning, i blame you and the greatness of this fic for my impending doom...meh monday mornings....
anywho! cant wait to read more! please update soon!
ps. if you have a mailing list for updates or anything could you please add me: spuds_domain@hotmail.co.uk
Comments from author:
*grins* Thanks!!! I'm so glad you like it! Um, Sorry about the impending doom.
Thanks for the review!
~ Kyra
Review By [
LeSang] • Date [13 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On The Hogwarts Express" from
zafaranReview:
{snicker} I *loved* the T-shirt sayings. Though I've seen the dragon one as "...do not anger..." I can't wait to find out what happens next. It would seem appropriate to go with a school who's motto translates as "Never tickle a sleeping dragon". I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it! Yeah, I've seen a couple different versions of the Dragon T-Shirt, as well. I'm hoping to be able to update here in the next couple of weeks. Thanks for reviewing!
~ Kyra
Review By [
zafaran] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On The Hogwarts Express" from
VeritasinSanguineReview:
um.. the word in latin for 'my own' is 'proprius'
Comments from author:
Thanks! I got my translation off a free online translator and I honestly didn't think my own, was 'meus own' but since I know no Latin, I just went with it. I'll probably go back and change it when I get a chance. Thanks for letting me know!
Review By [
VeritasinSanguine] • Date [4 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On The Hogwarts Express" from
nightslayerReview:
glad there was a kiss, 'cause you defintly should have been afarid!! but you did it right so theres no problem, i won't have to track you down or anything. update soon
Comments from author:
*grins* I figured, I'd probably need to be afraid...Maybe sleep with one eye open, if I hadn't had them kiss. I'm glad you liked it! And that I apparently did a good job with the kiss! No worries, I'll try and update soon!
Review By [
nightslayer] • Date [4 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On The Hogwarts Express" from
AzrielSunHawkReview:
AGH!!! this is GREAT!! DANG!! ok..i can wait..i can be patient..*ROTFL* who am i kidding?more please?????
Awesome fic, thanks so much!!
Comments from author:
LOL! I'm glad you like it! I'll definitely try and update soon!
Review By [
AzrielSunHawk] • Date [4 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On The Hogwarts Express" from
AlexisReview:
I liked the kiss. It's about damn time! lol
Ginny and Blaise are an interesting pairing. Looking forward to more of this.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked the kiss, I was pretty worried about it.
I agree, Ginny and Blaise are so interesting, I love that pairing!
Review By [
Alexis] • Date [4 Jun 08] • Not Rated