Review of chapter "Too Much to Dream Last Night" from
springReview:
I wonder if she anyone will realize that the cards were right? I love this chapter, very very cool on how you hinted that Buffy is likely not dead and could be being used by the Powers. More soon of this wonderful fic.
Review By [
spring] • Date [13 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Too Much to Dream Last Night" from
vampygalReview:
I really like this story and was glad to see an update. However, for some reason this chapter felt heavy handed to me. I don't know if it was Faith being so, well the scythe isn't here, Buffy must be alive or what.
Review By [
vampygal] • Date [12 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 Home- Is Where I Want to Be" from
wonderbeReview:
I find myself really enjoying this a lot, and look forward to where you go with this, how things might turn out for Padma and Harry, whether Terry will make an unwelcome appearance, and how things might go from here on out with the relative happines of all involved.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review. I glad you are enjoying my story.
Review By [
wonderbe] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 Home- Is Where I Want to Be" from
macalaarmstrongReview:
I really enjoy this story, but I hope that Padma and Harry do not get together in the end and I sincerely hope that Buffy comes back to a exhilarated Harry. Keep up the great work and update soon. Have a lovely day.
Smile,
Macala A.
Review By [
macalaarmstrong] • Date [31 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 Home- Is Where I Want to Be" from
springReview:
Love this chapter. The one worry that I have though is when Buffy comes back and a certain twin is falling for Harry that could be very bad. Don't tell me that Buffy is not coming back because you have made to many hints that she is still alive. Again I love this fic please please update this very wonderful fic again soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review. Harry and Padma is a one way thing at this point and as far as Buffy coming back, we'll just have to see.
Review By [
spring] • Date [30 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 Home- Is Where I Want to Be" from
BumblebeeReview:
I am really enjoying your story and how we are learning about the family. Please tell me you are not going to start a relationship with Harry/Padma. I was wondering if you are going to explain how Narcissa got so close to Buffy and the family to think she would get to make the decisions. I think I have read between the lines and know that Buffy isn't really dead so please bring her back soon. Go Buffy/Harry!! I have always liked that pairing. Update soon can't wait to know what happens next :)
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review. Harry/Padma is not really happening. The feelings at this point are strictly one way. Harry has still too much grief to even think about Padma in that way. It is a different situation for Padma, she is just getting out of an abusive relationship and is now in a family setting where she sees a father who cares about his children, who actually loved his wife and she can't help but transfer some of her longings onto Harry. As far as Narcissa and Buffy, that relationship developed in an earlier unpublished story in which Narcissa is an older potential whose powers were activated by the spell. I really don't have the time or space to go into the whole relationship, but it did develop over the course of 18 years. As far as the unpublished story, if I ever find my earlier notebooks with that story, I will publish it. But for now it remains unpublished.
Review By [
Bumblebee] • Date [30 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8 "I suppose I should collect my books"" from
vargamorReview:
I don't know why this story has so few reviews as it's really quite good. Very well written. It seems you're hiding plot points in little throw away lines and that is so very cool...I hate it when everything is in your face. I much prefer to see it come out in pieces and say "Oh...that's what she meant..." And judging by the rest of your reviews, you're doing a great job of keeping it subtle.
I'm assuming Buffy's not really of the dead as no wreckage was found and the twins (and really can't wait to see about their origin) are having dreams of her fighting monsters, so I can't wait to see her return.
I like the way you have a whole new generation of students but you connect them to ones with which we are familiar. I also like Terry Boot as a wife beater (not that I like wife beaters, mind, just saying..it's funky in a good way).
I like the way you have the kids dealing, they don't really come off as self centered..they come of as grieving the only way they know how. Maybe the use of the phrase "Heart and soul" could be ..done now, but Harry's reaction is well done, too. He goes from grief to anger to grief and that's pretty real.
Given Hermione's penchant for being a stickler for the rules, I thought her first thought of basically "yippee, let's yank her back to the living" was stretching, but I suppose you can always explain that as the sorrow talking.
I thought it was cute that Willow "explained" the resurrection in a very Willowy way...and Robbie's reaction was spot on for a teenager who was punked while trying to punk.
I like Abby and Robbie's interactions, the way they relate is cute.
Looking forward to seeing Buffy's family tree explained in detail.
All in all..a really good story.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your wonderful review. I was despairing a bit on the lack of reviews. I am glad you have taken the time to try to understand my story. The twins story might not get told in this story, but then again, the story has changed a bit from my original scriblings so it might yet pop up.
Review By [
vargamor] • Date [17 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8 "I suppose I should collect my books"" from
springReview:
It's been so long since I read his fic that I had to reread chapter five. It sounds to me from the twins that Buffy might still be alive and that the magic to tell that she is is somehow being blocked interesting. I also noticed that Abby is possably showing signs of becoming a slayer. I really hope that Robby finally gets over the idea of bringing Buffy back from the dead. Please please update this wonderful fic again soon.
Review By [
spring] • Date [15 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 "Talk, Talk, it's only talk."" from
blackrozeReview:
hi, love the story so far..... plz let buff come back, but remember if u do (bring her back) their is always a promblem or mistake.
anyway looking forward to more
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review. There is a plot line here somewhere, not just a revelation of grief, bear with me while I work through these opening chapters.
Review By [
blackroze] • Date [20 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
youareReview:
Hey, just wanted to let ya know that i love the new chap, can't wait for more. thanks.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review and I am working on the next chapter. The problem is that the chapter I have written out needs to be edited and put on the computer. Hopefully it should be done in about a week.
Review By [
youare] • Date [16 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 "Talk, Talk, it's only talk."" from
WolfladyReview:
Seems only fair that self-centered Buffy would raise self-centered kids.
Comments from author:
The children are not self-centered, only grieving. They just lost their mother and not thinking very straight.
Review By [
Wolflady] • Date [14 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 "Talk, Talk, it's only talk."" from
FritolaysReview:
Great update! Can't wait to see what happens next :)
Review By [
Fritolays] • Date [14 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 She said "How are you Harry?"" from
FritolaysReview:
Aww, poor kids. I wonder if Hermione is on to something. I can't wait to read more :)
Comments from author:
Hermione isn't the cleverest witch in her class for nothing. Thank you for your review.
Review By [
Fritolays] • Date [6 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 She said "How are you Harry?"" from
soulfuloneReview:
great update...interesting how Harry and Draco are still antagonistic toward each other and they're related by marriage....a suggestion: if you could differentiate between memory/flashback and present day with a different type of font (italics perhaps) it would be very helpful....other than that, i still love this fic, though it tears at my heart each time i read an update!!
Comments from author:
Thanks again for your review. Sorry about the confusion for the flashbacks. When I write it out on paper it seems to be a neat literary trick, when I type it out on the computer it comes across as confusing. I forget that I can use devices such as different fonts. Chalk it up to being new at the whole posting thing.
Review By [
soulfulone] • Date [5 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Darling Nikki" from
springReview:
Dispite this being a very sad fic I love this wonderful fic. I hope that you are able to update again soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing. It does get a bit less sad in future chapters, I just have to find the time to convert them from my notebooks (paper not computer) to a file to update.
Review By [
spring] • Date [4 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]