Review of chapter "Wanted: Ronald Weasley" from
TheEternalPixieReview:
you know I really just realised this but your nice name death eaters socity is Saw-C thought you should know oh and by the by when are we going to get an update out of you
Comments from author:
I'm working hard on the update for the next chapter of the fic. Unfortunately, this chapter has not been the easiest to write. I actually just got of the phone with one of my beta's earlier tonight and I told her that I want to have the chapter posted no later then a month. I know, it still seems like a while away, but I really have a hard time putting out a chapter that is not up to par. And considering right now I'm almost cringing (not in a good way) every time I read it, it needs more work.
. . . .wait a minute, I just realized that you might be talking about the fan art. . . . the next chapter for that is up in the air. I have three pieces that are in various stages and I realized that only one of them can be posted soon. The other two give away plot points that I'm not ready to reveal yet.
Thanks for the review and I'm glad that you are liking it so far.
Crowe
Review By [
TheEternalPixie] • Date [10 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The MT" from
EdbangerReview:
I've read the story and I love it. The addition of the fan art just takes it over the top. Of all the people to pick as your main hero and heroine, I would have never expected this pair. However, they work so well together from reading your writing. I do have one question however. From what I have read in the story, I want to know what part Draco and Neville are going to play in this considering their place in the fan art when so many other persons more closely connected could have been placed there. It peaks my interest especially, since it was mentioned that Draco hasn't been seen since the end of fifth year in their dark future. Neville hadn't been mentioned at all almost. Is this particular fan art foreshadowing or am I just reading too deeply? Anyways, keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
I am so glad you are enjoying it so far! I really wanted the fan art to be an expansion of the story as well as play with other possibilities.
Where did I mention that Draco hadn't been seen since fifth year? I know that I had stated that Faith had never met him so he had died earlier on in the war but I don't believe I ever gave a time frame. If I had worded something poorly or had added that bit of description it was by my mistake and that is something that I need to change. If you remember where, please let me know.
As for Neville and Draco. . . .
Honestly, Neville I'm not 100% sure what I'm going to do with him yet. I want what I use him for to really fit his personality and I have quite decided what would actions/situation/characterizations would fit him best. I have some rough ideas, but nothing that has been locked into solid. Sometimes my characters write themselves despite what I want to do with them and Neville seems to be doing just that.
So no, you are not reading things to deeply :) . . . . All I'm going to say about Draco is that he is going to be one of the most difficult characters for me to write. I love Draco and want to due his character justice.
Thanks for the review!
Review By [
Edbanger] • Date [15 May 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wanted: Faith Lehane" from
AidenMaraReview:
and faith as Lizzie Bennet..freaking amazing
Review By [
AidenMara] • Date [23 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wanted: Ronald Weasley" from
AidenMaraReview:
Fitzwilliam Darcy!!! omg I love that you put that in there..freaking awesome
Comments from author:
HA! Thank you! I'm not going to lie, I love Mr. Darcy! I'm so glad you noticed and appreciated it. I was getting worried that no one would get the reference.
Review By [
AidenMara] • Date [23 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wanted: Faith Lehane" from
AnnOfMidnightReview:
Yay! I didn't see you had artwork. Or I did and forgot again!
Review By [
AnnOfMidnight] • Date [23 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wanted: Faith Lehane" from
CutiepieReview:
So did Voldie not know about the Lara Croft alias then?
Comments from author:
Nope, he doesn't know about that alias. While he does know that there is someone running around calling herself Lara Croft, he doesn't know that it's Faith. Poor Voldie, as much as he wants to believe that he is omniscient, he is not. Ron has an alias that's not on his wanted poster that I'm going to try to bring in a future chapter as well.
Thanks, as always, for the review!
Review By [
Cutiepie] • Date [23 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wanted: Faith Lehane" from
angrymonkeyReview:
Always enjoy the fanart for the story, I noticed that Faith's d.o.b. is unknown to voldemort as well:)
Comments from author:
Yep! If I can't figure out how old she then there's no way in hell Voldie will be able to figure it out. After all, I've done numerous searches for it on the internet . . . . I don't even think Voldemort can use the internet. . . . .no wonder he's so grouchy!
Review By [
angrymonkey] • Date [22 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wanted: Faith Lehane" from
ElvenBookwyrmReview:
Gotta say, I love both the art and the story so far. Looking at your little blurb at the bottom of Ron's "Wanted" poster, I thought of something funny you may not have. You know what a good nickname might be for important people controlled by the Society for the Advancement of Wizarding Citizens?
...SAWC puppets.
Comments from author:
HA! SAWC puppets! You know, when I thought up the acronym I never thought that it could have so many humorous connotations!
Review By [
ElvenBookwyrm] • Date [22 Apr 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wanted: Ronald Weasley" from
angrymonkeyReview:
Neat wanted poster, only one question. Dexter Morgan? Really?:)
Comments from author:
I just couldn't help myself...
Review By [
angrymonkey] • Date [26 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wanted: Ronald Weasley" from
LooonyMoonyReview:
Wow!
Ron's wanted picture is amazing!
I'm asuming that he did do all those things, but against really influential DEath Eaters... right?
Anyway it's amazing and so is Mein Teil, keep the writing and the making of posters!
byee!
Comments from author:
Yes Ron did all of those things.
Ron was living in a society completely run by Voldemort. I've always thought that Voldemort was a charismatic man and with just a little bit of change in his tactics, he could easily take over the wizarding world. I know that I haven't gotten a whole lot into how Voldemort gains power in Mein Teil but it is a combination of fear tactics and offering the right solution to the public at the right time as well as making deals with the demons. A wizard living in Voldemort's utopia would have a very wonderful life - that is if the wizard agrees to submit to the Dark Lord.
If you've ever seen the movie V for Vendetta - think of the future as something like that only with demons and wizards - and a little more extreme. Ron and the Order of the Phoenix have not been fighting an easy battle and were not winning. Ron and the Order are like the character V in the movie, seen as terrorists in a Voldemort ruled world. Their image with the wizarding population has now flipped with that of the Death Eaters.
I have a wanted poster of Faith almost done and have one for Dawn started. I want to do one with Bill too, but haven't quite decided what I want him to look like.
I'm glad you like it so far and the next chapter of Mein Teil is going through betaing right now. Unfortunately it still needs work and probably won't be posted for another three weeks.
Thanks for the review!
Review By [
LooonyMoony] • Date [26 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cover Art" from
nicowaReview:
looks really cool. And I'm loving the story. but I'm wondering did you know that the name 'SAWC' if you say it if 'saucy'? Deliberate? :) Could be a good joke?!? And I love the alias'!
Comments from author:
HAHA! Nope, never even occured to me to pronounce it like that but I love it. I was saying it like 'sawk' the entire time. The other name that I was thinking about going with was The Council of Wizarding Superiorty or COWS but SAWC won out in the end.
Review By [
nicowa] • Date [26 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The MT" from
TempeReview:
Who's the bloke in the upper left hand corner? Neville? I think the only thing I would change would be the pink in the background. It's a little too feminine. Otherwise these are really well done. I love the Voldemort tat on young Harry (it is Harry right?). Very gory.
Comments from author:
Yeah, it's Neville (my beta first thought it was Xander). The poster was meant to be a play on teen drama's like The OC or Gossip Girl. That's why the pic I chose of Neville is more current/fashionable/heart-throb like then how I normally picture him. The same thing though could be said about Harry who's missing his glasses and wearing trendy clothing.
The original idea behind the pink sky in the background was going to be a type of sunset. But over the many stages that the pic went through, I kept making it more abstract. The pink color came from that idea.
Yeah it's Harry, a pic of Daniel taken from his Equus promotional shots. As soon as I saw the photo I knew what I wanted to do with it.
Review By [
Tempe] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The MT" from
hellmouthprincessReview:
Nice art, got my attention enough to make me to read the story!
Review By [
hellmouthprincess] • Date [22 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The MT" from
LooonyMoonyReview:
Hi!!
Te ad looks amazing!!!
keep it going! and please update mein teil soon!!!
byeee
Review By [
LooonyMoony] • Date [22 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]