Review of chapter "Second Look" from
DragonelfReview:
::Looks suspiciously at the story which is marked as complete::
You mean THAT'S IT??? This story feels like it is just a prologue to a much larger story.
::Feeds the plot bunny some HIGH Energy plot bunny food and gives the muse a HUGE jar of encouragement cookies::
I really, really hope you will get inspired to add more to it or at least gets inspired to write a sequel which is at least twice as long.
Comments from author:
Thanks! *chases after hyper plot bunny* If this thing grows, I guess I'll know who to blame, er, thank. ;-)
Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]