I don't know much about Guyver, but with the way you're writing this, I don't need to. The way you explain what's relevant while glossing over the rest is great. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Great Story So far. I like what you have so far. I look forward to more. Please continue *feeds plot bunny* dats gonna be a fat plot bunny after all the feeding I've done.

i love this story along with the iron tauri and the iron magus is a a great start hope you will continue the good work

This is a really good story. I hope you continue it soon. I wanna know what happens next. *pouts*

I LOVE LOVE LOVE your fic. I really enjoyed it and I look forward to see what else you have planned for Xander and the rest. I hope Abey will be ok and I can't wait to see the further interactions of the SG1 crew will have with Xand. Also thanx for saving Janet her characters was one of my faves from the series.

sweet

More, please. This is an interesting melange of stories, and I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

Cool! I like the Guyver/Xander combination. Request...Can somebody take the blinders off Buffy's eyes so that she realises that she is an ASS?!

the way I see it, she was a cheerleader that got too many wrong responsibilities at the wrong time.... and while she tried to do good -- and still tries, she can't help being herself... it's the tragedies in her life that piled on consistently that caused her to self-destruct from time to time. Don't get me wrong, I like the character of Buffy in spite of her flaws, but there are times when you hadda swear that the bleach she used to dye her hair also eroded parts of her brain along the way coz some parts are seriously missing.

Yay, new chapter.

The phrases the creature said, made me think of Sabretooth from the X-Men comics/movies as well as the Butcher from the game called Diablo.

::Feeds the plot bunny::


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¤ Thunder rolled. ... It rolled a six.
¤ - Guards! Guards!, Terry Pratchett
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thanks for the review, and i really wanted to squeeze in those two phrases in this fic.. blame the the decaf and a 3 a.m. zombie also known as me to come up with an interlude that is close to crazy.

Pretty good stuff.

Update soon please!

cool

Looking forward to the next bit.

This story is looking pretty good so far and I hope you
will get inspired to add myriad of new chapters to it.

::Feeds the plot bunny::


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Shadow is the diminution alike of light and of
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Now about that name, good GRIEF I'm glad you used the least annoying alternate spelling! Sheesh! *perplexed as all get out over most of those spellings*

LOL You're the one stuck you own tongue out, draw it back in already! *shaking my head as I walk off* Gooberhead! *chuckle*

You have a good night, ya hear? :)

you too, nightie-night, don't let the bed bugs bite (and if they do and are the size of a mack truck, use rule #37 with reckless abandon.)