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SulienReview:
Eeeeeeeeeeee! *claps hand over mouth to stop squeeing* But they're so darn cute! I agree, you should definitely write more slash, especially this pairing, because it works really well. Hmmmm...I can just imagine Abby's reaction. *grin*
Thanks for sharing this!
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Sulien] • Date [16 Mar 08] • Not Rated
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ElleriaReview:
Is good.
Comments from author:
Thanks! :-)
Review By [
Elleria] • Date [8 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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DemonaReview:
Oooh I just love the way that this turned out. I know you had mentioned it to me before, but it came out so freaking great! Woot!
I just wish we could have gotten a glimpse at Tony and McGee role-playing in real life.
Fabulous work, as usual!!
Comments from author:
I'm so happy with it for the amount of time I spent writing it the night it was due. And then you weren't here to share it with and I was pouting. I was proud.
:-)
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Demona] • Date [5 Mar 08] • Not Rated
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minijoReview:
Fantastic, great story. I loved the gradual unfolding of the romance, nice and slow over the whole chapter. Made it special, and I love the pairing. I really hope that you write more.
Comments from author:
This was my second foray into the McNozzo world. It was different for me to write with the online scenes instead of the actual characters, but kind of fun.
Glad you liked!
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minijo] • Date [1 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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axolotlReview:
Oh my god! You made an online romance between Tony and McGee work... and nickname reversal and .... I bow to your superior slashing ability. That was great especially, the porn audio clip Bond uses to encourage Handir... ahh that was great!!
Comments from author:
Yay! And to think that I never thought I would write slash...
I couldn't resist Tony -er- Bond playing some cheesy porn music at some point and time. I have pictures of the SIMS when thinking about it.
The name reversal was a stroke of luck. I even did some googling about proper use of newb or noob and newbie. :-)
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axolotl] • Date [1 Mar 08] • Not Rated
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DeanieReview:
Cute little ficlet. I especially like your descriptions of the online world.
Comments from author:
Thanks! The online world was the part I was most worried about as I did this.
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Deanie] • Date [1 Mar 08] • Not Rated