the only thing wrong with the entire verse is that there isn't any more! love it! can't wait for the next installment!

What a lovely story! I hadn't read this one up until now because I don't follow Torchwood (I think I've seen three or four episodes) but the way you wrote this made it possible for me to understand most of it (aside from the characters names). Great job!

Hi. Someone left a rec for this fic on my LJ, when I was asking for crossover stories involving Captain Jack.
I liked the use of the ghostly stuffed rabbit (even if Anya would not approve). I liked Dawn and Jack snarking on each other's fashion sense, despite being in a haunted house which was trying to kill them. I also enjoyed how you captured Jack's voice.
Even though it's probably apparent by this point that the final chapter was my favorite--since it would have worked as a cool stand-alone ghost story, even without the fan-fictional element, I liked the whole thing, including the explanation for why Buffy could remember The Year that Never Was and Dawn being the Key to Jack's lost memories (wouldn't mind a sequel about that ;p ). Also, meta jokes about Tinkerbell!Doctor never get old.

This series is fantastic, I'd love to see more of it!
I love your interactions between Jack and Dawn, they're voiced perfectly.

I love this story and can't wait to see what you write next in the series. The word jokes are great. :D

I like Jack and Dawn's interactions in this story. :)

More, please. :)

*** Ponder

Nice. I'm glad you are sort of continuing the story, although I really want to see what has happened with Buffy and the Doctor...

But I liked this one too.

Love it, absolutely love it. This series is great.

This is absolutely awesome! I really hope you continue this, because it is absolutely worth continuing. I had read the first story before (where Buffy ran away with the Doctor) but never seen the rest of it. Anything better than Dawn (who has recently become one of my favourite fic characters) with Captain Jack in Torchwood? I can't even think of it.
Plus, the story was interesting, the whole bit with the lost time and interesting ghost story thing was really good, and I just really love the idea of Dawn at Torchwood.
Congratulations!

Love this sequence (and I shudder to think how much trouble Jack and Dawn could get into...)

Wow, this was wonderful. The haunted house was perfectly creepy and a interesting way for them to meet. The way you combined the two worlds seamlessly brought a smile to my face. It was also nice seeing the story from Jack's perspective. The interactions between him and Dawn felt very real and flowed nicely...not to mention I love the idea of her working with the TW crew. So nice. Loved this.

Lovely, lovely, lovely! I've been wanting to read an amazingly good Torchwood crossover piece! A+ to you!

Loved this! Excellent work creating the tension and creepiness in the haunted house. Great interactions between Dawn and Jack. I'm looking forward to more.

Absolutely Fan-freaking-tastic!!

I'm LOVING this series and desperately hoping for more soon. Dawn and Jack... can I just say YUM.

Poor Ianto if Dawn sticks around though. He might just find himself all alone and slightly jealous. (Then again, maybe he wouldn't be all that lonely after all, if only Dawn was willing to share. We KNOW that Jack would have no problems with it. *wink*)