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Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Ollivanders" from zafaran
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This is *delightful*. Is there any chance of getting more chapters any time soon? I like how with the Dursley name not being used, that they're barking up the wrong family tree trying to figure out who Gwen knows in the Wizarding World. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Ollivanders" from wonderbe
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This is looking to be very fun, and liked how things are going for Gwen, and here's to Harry and Hermione being able to spend time together somehow.
Review By [wonderbe] • Date [24 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Ollivanders" from Lucinda
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An interesting beginning for a story - and I admit to being curious how Harry and Hermione have fared in the past eleven or so years.

A minor nitpick for chapter 2 - Vernon & Petunia Dursley's house had four bedrooms, not three. 1 - Vernon & Petunia's Room. 2 - the Guest Room, generally used by Vernon's sister Marge. 3- Dudley's Bedroom 4 - Dudley's Second Bedroom, where he kept all his old/broken toys. Harry was in the cupboard under the stairs until his first Hogwarts letter, and he was then moved - in spite of Dudley's protests - into Dudley's second bedroom.

Which tells me that a) the Durlsey's were quite well off, financially and b) they were extremely obnoxious people.
Comments from author:
I'd forgotten about the guest room. As for the cupboard/second bedroom - well, after all, Harry was telling a very simplified version of the story.

And if anyone I knew kept a kid in a cupboard while having a guest room, I'd have called the authorities.
Review By [Lucinda] • Date [25 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Ollivanders" from Jiltanith
Review:
So the wand was made the day Harry was born? At least, that's what seems to be implied . . .
Comments from author:
Or some other date that Hermione felt significant. Not necessarily Harry's birthday. For all we know it could be Hermione's birthday. Or Dumbledore's death. Or the day Voldemort was reincarnated in GOF... etc. You get the idea.
Review By [Jiltanith] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Ollivanders" from Lin
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You don't have all of the chapters of this story written already by any chance...do you???
I just noticed how quickly the last two chapters were posted.
Please update soon....i can't wait to see how she gets along at hogwarts.
Comments from author:
No. I had the story written through mid-chapter 8 prior to starting posting it, that's all. And that doesn't even get her to King's Cross.
Review By [Lin] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Ollivanders" from LNR
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Woo Hoo! More Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [LNR] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Ollivanders" from Lin
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Hermionie...so much in character, i love how she's trying to piece together a puzzle that has nothing to do wiht her!
I do wonder if Harry keeps in touch wiht his old friends, i'm eager for the next chapter.
Review By [Lin] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Ollivanders" from jupitarsdaughter
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ooo, is Harry not in touch with his old friends? Mother's side and not the same phoenix? Sweeet...
Comments from author:
Actually Ollivander was wrong about the mother's side - he assumed because of the name. That's Dudley's daughter.

And Harry and Hermione may very well be in touch with one another, just that there wasn't really reason (until Hermione met Gwen) for either of them to think anything was up that would affect the other. And since they met Hermione hasn't had the chance to contact Harry (it's only the next day...)
Review By [jupitarsdaughter] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Gringotts" from jsharay
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I like that even though she doesn't know about his background with the wizarding world she is protective of her "uncle harry".
Review By [jsharay] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Gringotts" from Jiltanith
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"Right hand? Oh, the right hand isn't doing anything. Why do you ask, left hand?"
Comments from author:
tee hee
Review By [Jiltanith] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: The Liaison" from Lin
Review:
Interesting Oc. I like that Harry shows up only once or so a year, like he wants to have contact with Dudley's daughter, but is almost afraid to get too close.
Comments from author:
Yeah; I figured it was either that, or simply that he's busy (with what we don't know) and that's the only time their schedules mesh (without pulling Gwen out of school, etc.)
Review By [Lin] • Date [22 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: The Liaison" from littleoldme
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This fic is quite delightful so far. I like your Gwen, and the idea of Dudley's daughter at Hogwarts is deliciously ironic.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [22 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: The Liaison" from luctykvul
Review:
This story contains an extraordinary amount of win. I'm looking forward to seeing how Harry and Hermione are involved with each other (I can only assume that the key being attached to the letter is a hint in this direcion?).
Comments from author:
The key and the letter weren't attached; I meant for it to read as they were delivered on the same day, but not together.
Review By [luctykvul] • Date [22 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: The Liaison" from Jiltanith
Review:
Bet Hermione's better at teaching Potions than Snape was . . .
Review By [Jiltanith] • Date [22 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: The Liaison" from jupitarsdaughter
Review:
Hermione? Sweeet.
Review By [jupitarsdaughter] • Date [22 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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