Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
CPTSkipReview:
While I liked your story, I wish there was more. There were a lot of interesting things that could have gone on here, but your story is so short nothing really happened. I don't think I've ever read a story with Willow and Faith in a relationship and find the idea intriguing. But everything went by so fast, I would love to see you expand this story with more detail and depth. Thank you for what you did give us.
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CPTSkip] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Not Rated