Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
ZaykaReview:
"My sister could break open your ribcage... with her eyes." Oh that was beautiful!! The perfect ending. I'm actually becoming a huge lover of Dawn/Dean fics... they're just so funny together!
Review By [
Zayka] • Date [30 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
MelliReview:
I loved this story; as well. Dawn and Dean were both very amusing and bratty as always, and I loved Dean calling Dawn 'Princess'. I think my favorite part was Dawn kicking Dean's ass at pool. This is a really great start; I am very excited to see how this story goes. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you!
I tried to write them both as true to character as I could considering that at the end of BtVS Dawn showed no signs of becoming less of a brat. Plus Dean can be such a baby sometimes. The rest isn't going to be so much a story but a like a loose confederacy of ficlets because I'm just about the laziest person you'll ever see.
Review By [
Melli] • Date [30 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
