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Review of chapter "Ch. 8" from kallipso

Review:

dies laughing. Great story.

Comments from author:

No no no, no dying allowed, not on my watch :P

Glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for letting me know. I have a hard time writing comedy, and this was the first and only multi chapter comedy I've attempted/written. It was difficult, like giving birth! Kept wanted to go angsty, and actually did in one little part there despite my intentions of keeping it all light.

Review By [kallipso] • Date [29 Aug 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Ch. 8" from Dieselsaliva

Review:

*giggles madly* Another adorable story. Thanks for the rec.
Poor Xander thou. *hugs Xander* Glad Spike rescued him from that "school"
I didn't trust either. lol

~B~

Comments from author:

You're welcome for the rec, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I have trouble writing comedy, and this was the hardest story I've written because I forced myself to make it funny almost the whole way through.

One final light/funny one you might like is "Nightflight".

Thank you very much for the fb, very much appreciated.

Review By [Dieselsaliva] • Date [6 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Ch. 8" from darkmagician

Review:

I hope you turn this into a series. I think that now he's getting rid of his sexual frustrations, Xander might find his powers easier to control. I got a kick out of the drabble. He turned the demons into plushies. That's funny!

Comments from author:

A series! I'm glad you like it that much, but honestly... this is the hardest story I've ever written. I don't think I'll ever be able to do another long fic that is full of comedy.

Heee, the drabble was fun. Might do more of those, I can handle that ::grins::

Thank you for your comments.

Review By [darkmagician] • Date [17 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Ch. 8" from neverwill

Review:

As much as I loved the story, I really loved the drabble. I can just picture the horrified demons reactions to being turned into cuddly stuffed toys!

Comments from author:

LOL, glad you enjoyed the drabble. Hopefully it gives a nice glimpse into their future.

Thanks for you comments. *Hugs*

Review By [neverwill] • Date [17 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Ch. 7" from selana

Review:

I just can't tell you how much I enjoy this story and how glad I was to see yet another chapter published before I was going to bed.

But where do you get those ideas from, I think the image of Spike naked in the hallway with his hands forming a gun will haunt me in my dreams tonight

Comments from author:

I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I think it is and will be my one and only comedy all the way through type story, because it is way too hard for me to try to stay funny. And there are lots of self doubts along the way, like is it too slapstick, too silly, etc... Thanks for letting me know it's working for you, though. I think the image will haunt Spike himself till the end of his days, lol.

Review By [selana] • Date [15 Apr 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Ch. 7" from chajalive

Review:

Great!
I was going to suggest you change the category to drama instead of comedy.
Chaja

Comments from author:

It wasn't THAT sad, lol. Just a tiny short period of drama, then back to the funnies. I tell you, though, I had to fight my dramatic/angsty instincts and force myself back to that funny place! Drawing to the end, glad you are still reading. Thanks for all the comments, I really enjoy them.

Review By [chajalive] • Date [15 Apr 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Ch. 6" from darkmagician

Review:

Won't they be surprised to learn that the thing that'll keep Xan 'grounded' is Spike.

Comments from author:

LOL, you got it in one ::grins:: And they're some kinda bastards.

Thanks for reading :)

Review By [darkmagician] • Date [13 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Ch. 6" from RachelleRyan

Review:

Ahh! No, don't sentence Xander to the humorless wonders. He won't last a week by himself with those jerks. How could Giles do that, oh I know, Xander isn't his Slayer so he doesn't fight for him. Bah.

Comments from author:

Yeah how insensitive of Giles, huh. A wee bit of angst, but should get back to being humorous real soon Thank you for commenting.

Review By [RachelleRyan] • Date [11 Apr 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Ch. 6" from chajalive

Review:

I would appreciate if you could update soon. I am riveted by the story, and cannot wait to hear more.
Chaja

Comments from author:

I'm really glad to hear you are enjoying this one. As you can see by the last chapter, even when I try to keep it all humorous, my angsty side shows lol. I'll post more up real soon.

Review By [chajalive] • Date [11 Apr 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Ch. 6" from slightlyeccentric

Review:

I can't believe you left the story there! I hope you update soon so we can find out what happens next.

Comments from author:

I'm slightly evol that way Yes, I'll post soon. Thank you for reading and commenting :)

Review By [slightlyeccentric] • Date [11 Apr 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Ch. 6" from aislinnrae

Review:

Oh wow, that was an excellent update! The end was so sad!! I got tears in my eyes.
Oh, I can hardly wait for your next chapter. This story is just lovely. Keep-a-writin' ^^

Comments from author:

Awww, sorry about the tears. I tried to keep it all funny, but funny is hard to write and angsty comes bit more naturally to me. We'll get it back on track though. Thank you for your lovely comments. *Hugs*

Review By [aislinnrae] • Date [11 Apr 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Ch. 5" from darkmagician

Review:

*sniggers* Tail? Funny! What's next, kitty cat ears?

Comments from author:

LOL, yeah that was a wee bit silly, wasn't it ::grins:: Still, good thing Spikey has no clue.

Review By [darkmagician] • Date [10 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from selana

Review:

*joining the giggles*

Spike with a tail is really just too funny... but if it leads to some kissing, it can't be that horrible LOL

Comments from author:

LOl, I was worried the tail was a wee bit much. It's okay, they both profited from it though ;)

Review By [selana] • Date [8 Apr 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Ch. 5" from GothicBianca

Review:

*giggles* absolutely wonderful! Spike with a tail. *laughs* I love it!

Comments from author:

Heee, I'm glad the tail wasn't *too much*. I kinda wondered/had doubts.

Review By [GothicBianca] • Date [8 Apr 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Ch. 4" from darkmagician

Review:

*cries with laughter* That whole bit with Giles being forced to strip? Oh my dear Deneir, that's just too funny. I think I'd pay to see that one, and the embarassment on his face. Spike would probably have taped it and posted it on YouTube. I love this so much.*dies from laughter*

Comments from author:

I did feel sorry for poor Giles. The straight and narrow guy is always the most fun to get! Spike would totally youtube it, and advertise it any way he could.

Glad you're enjoying the story :)

Review By [darkmagician] • Date [7 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]