Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from
BlueEyedJediReview:
Can Xander's shield protect him form the gaze of a Basilisk?
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BlueEyedJedi] • Date [29 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from
DragonelfReview:
I have just reread the series and I found it just as good as the last time I read it.
::Gives the plot bunny a couple of slices of carrot cake::
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Brain: Are you pondering what I'm pondering?
Pinky: Whoof, oh, I'd have to say the odds of that are terribly slim, Brain.
Brain: True.
Pinky: I mean, really, when have I ever been pondering what you've been pondering?
Brain: To my knowledge, never.
Pinky: Exactly. So, what are the chances that this time, I'm pondering what you're pondering?
Brain: Next to nil.
Pinky: Well, that's exactly what I'm thinking, too.
Brain: Therefore, you are pondering what I'm pondering.
Pinky: Poit, I guess I am!
- Pinky and the Brain
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Dragonelf] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from
JamesReview:
Oh, I would have chosen the polyjuice one as well.
So, who is Todd?
And DOCTOR WHO IS COMING!!!!!!! YIPEEEE!!!!!
I am really liking this story.
James
Review By [
James] • Date [18 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from
missinglinkReview:
Nice pick up to your leaving off point. Glad you found the beginnings of the next part of this arc. For some reason I hear Matthew McConahey in my head when reading the Todd part. Was wondering just who's voice came to mind as you wrote it? Am continually enjoying the sly and nearly friend like demeanor between Xander and Snape.
Side note, would wonder how a meeting between Metatron and Severus would go? Just lots of dry wit and glowering?
Hope the next chapter is Xander confronting Moaning Myrtle. After her flirtatious attitude towards Harry in Goblet of Fire would like to see something similar with Xander as he is closer to her age. Also am guessing, but likely to see Ginny either partially depetrify or completely come out of it due to Xander's kiss to fingers to her forehead. Seems the likely avenue you have set in place. Having never read the Technomage books or watched Babylon 5 I am enjoying discovering how your takes on their incoporation into this world you have are playing out.
Oh, you might want to make some mention of continued communication and placement within the BTVS timeline so in case you do bleed them together there isn't any jumping around. Also might be fun to see what they do without him. How is Faith getting along? There is still some Zombie trouble to come right or did that all play out last year? See I think I forgot and so too may have those who haven't reread the beginning recently. Not a big thing, but it is something that further ties the world's together and builds Xander's needed homesickness that would help drive him to return if only for a summer or a brief crisis.
Keep it up and thanks for the addition.
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missinglink] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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FyrlocheReview:
Ah, yes. The old 'blame my vacationing muse' excuse. *grins* I've used that one a few times myself. There are times when you know where you want to go but you just can't seem to get there. Good to see a chapter for this story. By the way, you've got a minor spelling error in the paragraph about Ginny being petrified and Xander's feelings about it. You have the word 'last' instead of 'lash'. Minor stuff, but a word processing program won't catch it because the word was not, technically, misspelled. Why do I get the feeling that 'Todd' is based on Jack Black? I look forward to more. (From this one and your others.) Later.
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Fyrloche] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from
DragonelfReview:
Yay, new chapter. By the way are the words "Edited to here" supposed to be there?
::Gives the plot bunny a couple of slices of carrot cake::
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MacGyver: The great thing about a map:
it gets you in and out of places in a lot
of different ways.
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Dragonelf] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from
WisprReview:
Love it, really like how you are interweaving Xander into the HP storyline without him usurping the HP characters. Good work!
Wispr
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Wispr] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from
TatsuReview:
hehe so does that mean that the first is in the bitter pill? ^_~
Review By [
Tatsu] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from
ScrappychicReview:
"The Oncoming Storm" - Sweet, a Doctor Who Xover too! Are you going to be using 9 or 10? I'm assuming it's not an earlier incarnation because you mention the "flower of London" (Rose) and she only traveled with 9 and 10.
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Scrappychic] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from
fanofkaliReview:
Good chapter.
Enjoyed the Lacuna Coil mention, I like their stuff.
Review By [
fanofkali] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from
RachelKReview:
Little confused by this chapter... but the idea that you're planning a Doctor Who crossover is kind of cool.
Comments from author:
ok, what was confusing and i'll try and clear it up for you...
but yeah, The Doctor will be making an appearance along with some other characters as this universe has grown far beyond what i had originally planned
glad you're enjoying it
M
Review By [
RachelK] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from
souhReview:
theres this little voice in the back of my mind screaming "DO THE GIT ONE! DO THE GIT ONE!"
Comments from author:
roflol... i know which one i'd choose
glad you're enjoying it
M
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souh] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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WolfWriterReview:
I liked it! I liked it!
You're bringing the Doctor into this? So that Xander can help him save Rose?
It has to be Doctor Number 9 then, cuz that's when she first met him.
Comments from author:
yup... The Doctor will be coming into this... and bringing hell with him lol
glad you're enjoying it
M
Review By [
WolfWriter] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from
BlackguardReview:
totally awesome fic so far, looking forward to more
Review By [
Blackguard] • Date [28 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from
lillybReview:
This is a Xandertastic story. To much? Ok well it is really good. I only saw one small tiny little problem, Percy, Fred and George are still at Hogwarts during this time I can understand not talking to them a lot (in fact I didn't even miss them until now) but Xan should have met them... right?lol
Review By [
lillyb] • Date [15 Jun 08] • Not Rated