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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShadowTrey
Review:
Great story! The plot was developed nicely, Xander's character was...believable (in the BtVS universe), especially in his role of Jack of all Trades. But the best thing about this was the reactions the two slayers had after having worked with him.

Might I be so immature as to beg and plead for you to see about making this into a series? There aren't that many stories about Post-Council Xander that are this well written.
Review By [ShadowTrey] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from redrikki
Review:
The problem with rumors is that you don't know which ones to believe. He was powerless and not much use in a fight. He singlehandedly saved the world. He forgave horrible attacks on him. He held grudges for years. He was the heart of the Council. He was only good for fixing windows. He quit the Council when he got fed up with the bullshit. He was fired for incompetence.

Nice dig at the conflicting and bizarre ways Xander gets portrayed in the fandom. The scene at the bar was equally brilliant for the same reasons. How many stories are there out there with hyena!Xander or soldier!Xander? I like your human and bluffing Xander so much better.
Review By [redrikki] • Date [28 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MBB
Review:
Fantastic story.

The only thing that made me blink was Dawn's "Now, go please your woman sexually,” - but then I realised she was over-exposed by Anya's babysitting. :-)
And I think her comparison of Xander with Angel was a little crual. Hilarious of course, and spot on - but crual. :-D

I agree with the others, reading more about the rumors floating around him in the Councill Hallways. Or just from the other scoobies.
In fact, the way you had Megan discribe Faith's Fanatic training methods, I'd like to see a fic where a bubbly Buffy comes to visit (not recognized because she is rumored to be an absendminded cold bitch), and picks a random SIT to be trained to take Faith down in X lessons. (Ok, maybe a too detailed request, but I really like to read more fics from this series)
Review By [MBB] • Date [27 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LFW
Review:
Excellent fic
Thanks
Looking forward to more fics
Review By [LFW] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from junnights
Review:
interesting:)
Review By [junnights] • Date [26 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from GundumM
Review:
loved it
Review By [GundumM] • Date [23 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShyBob
Review:
"You gave your sword a stripper name."
Best. Line. Ever.

I'd be a little disturbed by phoukabro's Xander fetish if his stories weren't so FREAKIN' AWESOME! This story has a superb balance of action and drama, and the POV switches are clear and help the story progress nicely. The dialogue is what really makes the story (see quote above). I could see where the story was going from the get-go, but the ride was great nonetheless.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [25 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mymatedave
Review:
Really like this fic, send your brother my compliments.
Review By [mymatedave] • Date [15 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from banner
Review:
I love a smart, savvy Xander. This was a delight from beginning to end.
Review By [banner] • Date [30 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from HiltonK
Review:
Wicked stuff. I really liked your Xander.
The stuff with the new council and the gossip about who xander really was - the way myths are born!
There are more tales I'm sure, have a word with your muse eh?
Review By [HiltonK] • Date [23 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (2007%20Donor)Sulien
Review:
*chuckling* Loved this; Xander, the Rogue Demon Hunter. I hope you write many more stories in this series.
Review By [(2007%20Donor)Sulien] • Date [2 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Thraxis
Review:
Good story. Pleasure to read a Xander story that doesn't involve some Deus ex Machina giving him super powers or turning him into Rambo.

Hope you write more like this.

And in the Places He'll Go line too.
Review By [Thraxis] • Date [30 Apr 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DancyerMcCoy
Review:
Excellent! Well written, good characterization, wonderful story line. I hope this is the beginning of a new series, it just begs to be continued.
Review By [DancyerMcCoy] • Date [24 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from richardo
Review:
I give this story 10/10. I loved it. The story is well written. Could picture the scenes all through the story. Thank You for another beautiful story!
Review By [richardo] • Date [22 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (2007%20Donor)TheBear
Review:
This was great!
i loved 'oh the places he goes' and this has the makings of a similar opportunity for multiple adventures, with a different cant. Definitely wouldn't mind the continuing thread of locking wits with Robin (can you say Oedipus complex) Wood.
i hope your 'bro' continues this!
TheBear!
Review By [(2007%20Donor)TheBear] • Date [20 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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