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FritolaysReview:
Oh please please please update this! I am really falling in love with this story! Absolutely awesome :)
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Fritolays] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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KeshkreatureReview:
Oh, I love it! They are so sweet together, and you write them so well!
Review By [
Keshkreature] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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TempiReview:
The story is progressing nicely. I look forward to reading more (hopefully soon).
Review By [
Tempi] • Date [19 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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zigpalReview:
Great update. See, even Faith and Willow this non-date was a bunch of hooey, and the ending you gave us also proved that. Try not to make it too long for us to wait. I want to see how this non-date ends.
Review By [
zigpal] • Date [18 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ZombiegirlReview:
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Zombiegirl] • Date [17 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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PATMReview:
I think I should stop staring now and look away discreetly. Thanks for updating.
Review By [
PATM] • Date [17 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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SamarkandReview:
I love Buffy's analysis of the film. Good one, by the way, and apparently quite realistic in the depiction of the muay thai style used by the star.
The slow reveal of Buffy's world and nature is delicious. More than the Satsu reveal, I'm awaiting Veronica's reaction to the news that it isn't just vampires that are out there. Oh, and that her girly friend can bench press a Crown Victoria.
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Samarkand] • Date [17 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Facts are for the Reference Section" from
JessReview:
My first reaction to the end of this chapter:
Damn you and your angst!
Review By [
Jess] • Date [9 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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zigpalReview:
Great update. Poor dilusional blonde girls, they honestly think that if they set parameters, they will stay in control. Uh-huh, yeah, let's see what happens on movie night, and maybe then, I'll believe them.
Review By [
zigpal] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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sopchoppyReview:
Very well written chapter, thanks for the update, more please.
Review By [
sopchoppy] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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PATMReview:
I continue to enjoy the dialog between these two and B is looking a little duplicitous at this
point in their flirting. Satsu is not the big mystery here, but why B is holding back yet
fully engaging and allowing V to be so also is that mystery. Is movie night the reason B is
looking for Mac to give why V is not contacting her? Or is it a broken date? Enjoying it! The
Soap goin' full on bubbly now!
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PATM] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Return of the MAC" from
ZombiegirlReview:
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Zombiegirl] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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zigpalReview:
Great update. Is Veronica talking to Buffy's actual Willow trying to get information from her too *laughs* I loved the Mac giving Buffy advice like Willow would, nicely done.
Review By [
zigpal] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Return of the MAC" from
PATMReview:
You left off chapter 14 with Satsu being the subject of a question that would be answered in
chapter 15. What happened? Apparently a couple of weeks have passed "again" and once
more Buffy is the cartoon love struck french skunk chasing Veronica the cat with an unfortunately
placed white stripe down her back. Good dialog and funny situations continue to amuse,but
Buffy Veronica are the center.
Review By [
PATM] • Date [1 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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BunneyReview:
You are doing an awesome job building this relationship...keep going :)
Later and Love
Bunney
Review By [
Bunney] • Date [1 Sep 08] • Not Rated
