I do love the fic. The fact that Xander is slowly beginning to see that Demons aren't the only evil is pretty good.

I know you mentioned that Rick was coming... so he'll be there for the feast? What about Evie? Alex? Jon? Will they be there too?

I wonder.... If Ardeth is too busy at times to teach Xander.. who will? The people there do not speak English.... and I'm sure that Giles doesn't speak the dialect that they use either....

That's why he's getting coverage at Hamunaptra so he can teach him. I don't about abyone but Rick right now, Evie annoyed me, seriously.

Hmm, this is good and I can see a lot of paths that you could take with this. You could have that half brother coming to visit be Daniel Jackson and that could lead to integrating the Stargate universe. You could have them meet Ron's older brother the one that's a curse breaker and that could lead to an introduction to the Harry Potter world.

If you really do not want to include another show in there you could get Evie to come back to Egypt intending to do more research on Amunaptra and get to meet the gang. Or something could happen and Dawn being the key would have some effect on the seal between the dead and the living, and she could somehow get cut and end up freeing either Imhotep or The Scorpion King and Evie and Rick would come back to help them put them back.

The bad guy (whichever one you pick) could become focused on destroying Dawn or possessing her since she's such a powerful person/item/entity whatever. And of course the gang would take offense in that and they would try to protect her. You could also make them vacation there and continue on their intended rest and relaxation. They could get to know the medjai and become familiarized with their fight. Xander and his brother's relationship would grow as they get to know each other. Giles could bask in their vast library of information. Buffy could train, and Dawn could learn how to tap into her Key self.
You could also focus on Spike and his struggle with his demon, since his soul's gone. Xander could nurture him back to health and they would get closer through that. He could travel to that place and attempt to get another chance at his soul and have the demon there refuse. So many ways to go with this.

Those are just ideas that popped up in my head when I read this. I hope that one of those strike a fuse in you and inspires your muse to write something great.

well, the only thing is the half brother is Rick, not Daniel. but Ardeth knows Daniel which is supposed to turn up in this one. I need to figure out how the Scoobies react to what Ardeth does to trespassers.

Thing is, I'm not sure if Buffy and Faith and Giles can have the Medjai knowledge. They can have some but others are blood line tie only. Xander can learn it but the others? I don't know. Ardeth would have to think on that hard. And notice he didn't blame Xander for their mother.

But remember the Medjai have rules about who gets their knowledge and who doesn't. the ones who attacked were sent by remnant of the Old Council of Watchers like Wes' father and all. He doesn't want them to know the Medjai because of what the Medjai are (Better than them). And that's why he and Travers were against Xander. Even though he doesn't carry the tats, they knew who he was by his mother (Because Everyone knew) and they knew Ardeth would come if Xander called.

I don't know if he'll get the ones on his face or not because Ardeth is the king. The forehead ones i mean, but he can have the ones on his hands and under his eyes...does that make sense?

cute

Thank you.

I'm glad you are expanding on this. Since it is set in Egypt, have you thought about a slight Stargate crossover mixed in? Maybe not the good guys, but the bad guys might give you a focus for your heroes and Xander a time to access SolderMemories without being SuperXan.
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the thing is he said he lsot those memories after a while. I already ahve an idea for a stargate cross that I may work into this one. we'll see .

Well now ... this one is an interesting concept ... I would hope that you continue ...

Give me soem ideas that DON'T make it Super Xadner and DON'T have him take the king ship and I might

Hope to see more soon!

I have no idea at all wehre to go next

I love your Xander fics. Are you gonna continue the Zeppo in Xanderland one? I love your ideas with that one.

Working on it. Thikning on what ahppens while Giles is there.
This one I dont knwo waht's next on and Falon adn Fledge I'm thinking on a dmeon running into Ardeth

Original Ardeth? Reincarnated Ardeth?

The BtVS alternate timeline is helpful, but a Mummy timeline would be of the good.

I'd like to see more if you get the time and inspiration.

Original the mummy cna be in about any time. In Egypt there are still alot of people who look down on the natives and snort at the myths and curses.If you ahve any dieas for wher ei could go next Email me please. I'm not sure what the coobies will amke of the Medai and waht they do. They predate the WC

ohh, i hope you add more to this!

I have no idea what to add to it. I do take ideas.

I like the idea. Might be interesting to expand on. Question though: Why is this marked as slash? The vague Giles/Ethan comments?

Xander/Spike. And I wouldn't know where to go from here. Ardeth is the king and the leader, I don't know if Buffy could handle knowing there are others who face worse evil than the Hellmouth.