Review of chapter "The Slayer" from
DeanandBuffyForeverReview:
I really like this story so far. I think Buffy and Alec would make an excellent pair.
Please update soon.
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DeanandBuffyForever] • Date [3 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Slayer" from
stasaReview:
I like the story so far, hope you do continue writing, it would be a shame not to see it finished.
I'm hoping that in the next chapter Buffy might get some answers, oh and I know there are quite a number of stories out there wright now with the Buffy/Alec paring, but they are so darn cute together... :D
If you do choose to keep writing, I hope it would have that paring in it, if not I'd settle for a couple of Alec's witty remarks :)
Review By [
stasa] • Date [3 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Slayer" from
QueenofbitcasReview:
i like it so far- hope you keep going
Review By [
Queenofbitcas] • Date [26 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Slayer" from
SlayerandWereLeopardReview:
excellent fic so far. Looking forward to more.
Review By [
SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [25 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Slayer" from
AllenPittReview:
ok, there are vamps here, so the odds increase that this is the future of her timeline, not an alternate reality.... From tv does she now realize it's 2019? Assuming she tries to contact the council, not sure how she could go about it... Eyes Only could make inquiries for her for specific people, but she'd need to know about him...maybe if she runs into Max again...meanwhile the vamps now know about her and will be desperate to take her out before their ranks are decimated.....
Review By [
AllenPitt] • Date [24 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "That's not very nice." from
WiseReview:
I'm not sure why you didn't make this chapter 2 of the previous story. Two thousand words isn't more than a snippet by any stretch of the imagination. :P
Review By [
Wise] • Date [8 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "That's not very nice." from
RevDorothyLReview:
Intriguing, though there are still a number of typos ('hear' when you meant 'her' or 'trough' when you meant 'through', etc.). Hope you'll continue this.
Review By [
RevDorothyL] • Date [8 May 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's not very nice." from
draconisReview:
Will you please either provide slightly different titles for each "chapter" (e.g. Bring On The Darkness: Not Nice, or Bring On the Darkness 2, Bring On The Darkness 3, or similar).......or else write ONE story with multiple chapters?
Having multiple "stories" (where a "story" is a separate entry in the TTH index) all with the same name in the index is going to be confusing. It also makes navigating through the story very difficult.
Thanks.
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draconis] • Date [8 May 08] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's not very nice." from
AllenPittReview:
First big question is, is this her world's future or an alternate reality... if her future then there should be a council of slayers, watchers, etc. Eyes Only would likely be able to find them...not sure if there's still an internet or not...
* She was very lucky the police didn't ask her for ID---remember she can't move from one sector of the city to another without passing through a checkpoint (well, she can jump across buildings at night, but not 'officially' )---
Hopefully she'll run into Max soon, though she'll get mistaken for an X-series. But no barcode, that will confuse people a lot. They might figure she's a new 'stealth/infiltrator' model.
* Are there vamps in the city? Demons? Also, did Manticore use any demon DNA in creating people?
IF it is her world's future, the presence of the scythe might get noticed by Willow or others....
Review By [
AllenPitt] • Date [8 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "That's not very nice." from
KristalReview:
Yay you continued! Hope to read more of Buffy in good old (future) Seattle! Good job!
Review By [
Kristal] • Date [8 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pilot" from
whinybratReview:
i like how you have started, i hope you make this an alec/buffy pairing cause im currently working on a story with those two.
Review By [
whinybrat] • Date [5 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pilot" from
PreaphisReview:
Was she actually sent to the future or to an alternate reality? Nice start, eager to read more :)
Review By [
Preaphis] • Date [4 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pilot" from
RockyWilliamsReview:
Good start. Could be a neat story. You have a spot or two where you use the wrong to/too/two but other than that, it seems ok from a spelling/grammar point.
Review By [
RockyWilliams] • Date [3 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pilot" from
SlayerandWereLeopardReview:
excellent start! looking forward to more.
Review By [
SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [3 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]