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Review of chapter "Attack of the snowball" from snipehunt
Review:
This is great. Does Buffy know that Willow, Dawn, Hermione, Harry etc have all made themselves immortal?
Buffy and Xander becoming long lived should be great news since her sister won't have to watch her grow old and die..

Still don't understand why Ginny doesn't get the power up.

"Who wants to live forever
Who wants to live forever?

Who dares to love forever?
When love must die"
Comments from author:
Yeah Buffy knows for the rest. As for Buffy being long lived, I'm going with the idea that she came back from the dead a little less than human, mix in the demonic energy from the slayer and presto.

Ginny isn't going to age and die an old lady but she isn't as immortal as Harry.


Thanks for the review.
Review By [snipehunt] • Date [27 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Firsts" from Bunney
Review:
wow...ummm...neat :)

Later and Love
Bunney
Review By [Bunney] • Date [5 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Firsts" from Wolfkin
Review:
Boy, it's just "Beat Gaby with a stick week", idn't it? I hadn't realized she liked Trista that much.

Good chapter. I liked it lots, even though Gaby takes another hit here. Maybe Sylvie can come for a visit and cheer her up?

*hands over more food for the plot bunny*
Comments from author:
I was reminded the other day how emotional people can be. How little things can spiral out of control even for adults. I do like Gaby, even if my muse has tossed her a few lemons lately. The reaction had less to do with Trista and more to do with her sister. It was driven home that her sister has a life with parts that don't involve her. As for Sylvie, it's a good guess.

Watches the plot bunnies devour the food.
Review By [Wolfkin] • Date [3 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Night time wandering" from Wolfkin
Review:
Hey, another great chapter, though I am curious as to why you're following HBP and killing Dumbledore. Or is he going to fake his death and go behind the scenes? I guess we'll find out relatively soon, neh?

Gotta admit, I was excited that you'd posted 4 chapters, well, until I noticed it was the same chapter posted four times! ;) Seriously, I think the site hiccuped or something.

As for Bunney's comment about Gaby getting hurt last chapter, I didn't like it either, though I agree with you that the bad guys must sometimes win a few little ones so kicking their asses later is that much sweeter. Also, and forgive me for saying so, but Gaby was getting quite the case of "Superman(or Supergirl, in her case) Syndrome". It seemed to me she was starting to think she was unbeatable and, as much as I hate to see one of the kids get hurt(story wise or real life, for that matter), she did need to be knocked down a peg or two. That said, I'm looking forward to seeing what Willow does to whoever hurt her daughter! ^_^

Anyway, keep the great work a'comin', okay?
*sets down a case of nibblements for the plot buny*
Comments from author:
As for Hbp I'm sticking with it in so much as the explanation for the curse, it's going to kill him at some point. As for finding out what happens yes. I'm extremely sorry about the 4 chapters posted glitch. I updated during and after the site back up. Not sure that was what caused it but grr.

Gaby is rather powerful, but that doesn't mean she can't get hurt. I imagine it was a learning experience for her. Hopefully it curbs the feelings of invincibility. As for what Willow does to the person/group responsible... well it can't be much worse than what Xander is planning if he finds them.

I look at Gabrielle's trials as a learning experience. The more she goes through the more she learns and changes.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Wolfkin] • Date [30 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dead man walking" from Bunney
Review:
yippee kiy a MUTHA-fER! LOL, I am not happy about Gabby ouchies but hey waht can you do right?

Later and Love
Bunney
Comments from author:
Yeah well no one really is happy about Gaby getting hurt. But sometimes what has to happen isn't always what you would like to happen. (even in a story:) ) The bad guys sometimes do put up a fight and can cause serious issues. That's the way the cookie crumbles. The scoobies in my story are slightly better in that they will learn from their mistakes. Thanks for the review, it helps fuel the creative process.
Review By [Bunney] • Date [8 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gift wrapped" from Bunney
Review:
Comparitivly that was wicked short!! So get back here thi I wanna read miss :)

Later and Love
Bunney
Comments from author:
Yeah it was wicked short. Sorry about that. But I felt in the mood to write so I did. I'm hoping to get another chapter out soon. Hopefully it will be longer.
Review By [Bunney] • Date [6 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What are you?" from draconis
Review:
The sudden shift to much darker themes completely took me by surprise! Adds real depth to the story.

The imagery conjured in my mind as Gabrielle started her "I am the wind..." speech was quite strong. I could easily envision that on a theatre-sized screen with attendant visual and audio effects and the full-body impact of a massive low-resonance DTS system. Awesome.
Comments from author:
I loved the imagery in my mind as I wrote it. It worked so well for the character. Thanks for the vote of confidence and the review.
Review By [draconis] • Date [14 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What are you?" from Wolfkin
Review:
Great chapter, though was Gabi using glamours or or is she really changing forms. You can't be too sure with that kid! I loved the "enslavement" of Draco and the total intimidation of Snape. Are you planning on Snape-y finding out who the kids really are anytime, soon or otherwise? Just curious, really. Keep up the good work, k?
Comments from author:
As to the changing forms part with the lightening, she could be using either a glamour or actually changing form. She is probably just using a glamer as it probably can't be fun to flicker flash between forms like that. As for Snape, well who can say what he can figure out. He might figure things out or he might not I'm not yet sure when he will figure it out, but at some point he will. I'm hoping to get another chapter out soon.
Review By [Wolfkin] • Date [14 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What are you?" from Bunney
Review:
YAY GABY!!!!!

later and Love
Bunney
Comments from author:
The chapter was fun to write. Glad you enjoyed.
Review By [Bunney] • Date [13 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "That time of the month." from Bunney
Review:
oh oh oh oh ohoh oh oh !!!!!You are evil i tell you! :)

Later and Love
Bunney
Comments from author:
Yeah, maybe a little. On the upside I'm working on the next chapter.

It was a fun chapter to write. :)
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Bunney] • Date [5 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "That time of the month." from arkeus
Review:
A bit cruel of Gabrielle not to reverse the spell, and a bit weird for the teachers not to ask her to do it.
Comments from author:
Well let's just say that Snape doesn't have a reason to suck up to anyone that gives a damn about Malfoy. Five years of dealing with Malfoy... and maybe a chance to finally get him to learn some compassion... well it's worth a shot. Plus he is scare to hell of Gabrielle's mother. As for asking her to change him back who said they didn't. Draco royally messed up a friend of her's school life. She grew up with stories of how much of an ass he is.. So it's not gruel so much as deserved.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [4 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Duel to the pain." from Bunney
Review:
LMAO!!!!! You really made him a bitch now!!! LOL

Later and Love
Bunney
Comments from author:
I'm sort of still debating how badly Gabi is going to mess him up. She isn't as nice as her father but she isn't completely evil.
Review By [Bunney] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Duel to the pain." from Wolfkin
Review:
That was GREAT!! ^_^ ^_^ I mean, I knew Malfoy was stupid, but to sic *snakes* on Gabrielle?! Okay, to be fair, he didn't know, but it was still hilarious. I liked how Snape noticed it was time to quit, but didn't get to stop things in time and Dumbledore's line at the end was perfect!

Outta curiosity, though, just how long is Draco Malfoy gonna be Daphne Malfoy? ;)

Keep up the good work and don't forget Willow's Witch Slayers, okay?
Comments from author:
Snape while not the nicest person in the world is a sharp cookie. As for the snakes I figured he would try it. As for Dumbledore, I used a good chunk of his outlook on the Dursleys. He has a sense of humor so I figured he would see the humor in it.

I'm not sure how long he is going to remain a girl.. but my muse is tossing around a deal for him to not be.. So I'll see how that works out.

As for my other story I should have some stuff out for it soon. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Wolfkin] • Date [27 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Illegal gambling" from Bunney
Review:
Kick That kids ASS!!!!!!okay now get back here so I can read it....

later and love
Bunney
Comments from author:
Actually I'm posting the follow up as I write this. Well I was in the process of posting then I noticed a review. :) Hopefully you like what happened with Malfoy. Either way I would love another review telling me your thoughts on it.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Bunney] • Date [27 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A werewolf on the Hogwarts Express" from Frogsareevil
Review:
looks like a good story, but which of your other stories is this a continuation of? thanks.
Comments from author:
Okay as much as I would love to rattle off an answer from the top of my head, I'll check the order of the other stories.

Read Willow's Cousin first. Then Ghostly Witch Watchers. From there start Willow's Witch slayers. At about chapter 8 it branches off to The buried reports of the 9th Chevron. So you can read that then or wait until you finish the rest of Willow's Witch Slayers.

Tara and Immortality is mostly stand alone but it does cross a touch with Ghostly Witch Watchers. It can be read without the other stuff fairly easily.

A wand, a werewolf and a demon girl branch off from Willow's witch slayers at around chapter 17 or 18.

So basically all of the stories I've posted on the site (at the current time) are connected.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Review By [Frogsareevil] • Date [26 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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