like it, get more chapters out.

I think I may have reviewed this already . . . I'm certainly already tracking it. Anyway, this is an interesting story and I really look forward to seeing where you go with this.

~Begs for More~

Wow! I love it! ^^ This is a hell of a good story

All I can say is that your muse better be faithful to this story. I like it too much for it to be just another incomplete story here at tth.

So, no Sunnydale...well, gosh!

James

This looks good. Can't wait to see where you go with it.

Someone else will have pointed this out already, but I think you're confusing the 21st and 22nd centuries here:

'“No, the last demon was wiped out in the great war of twenty one forty three.”

'“No demons?” Faith asked, excited that it could actually happen in her lifetime.

'“The last slayer called was Melaka Fray,” Daniels said with a smile. “Sometime in the early twenty first century, we only have sporadic records of the battles that took place but it’s believed she managed to...”'

2143 wouldn't be in Faith's lifetime, if you figure the battle against the First took place in Sunnydale in 2003 (early 21st century -- 140 years before the time Daniels mentioned), and I thought "Fray" was set in the 22nd century, at the very least -- certainly not in our century.

[I checked your Wikipedia reference and it actually says that "Fray" is set hundreds of years AFTER the (presumed) last Slayer was called in the early 21st Century -- meaning, Melaka Fray is the first slayer to be called in the several centuries SINCE (presumably) the actions of Buffy and Co. in activating all the potentials in the early 21st century, putting Fray herself in at least the 23rd century, if not later:

"It has been centuries since the last Slayer was called. Demons were banished from the Earth at some point in the 21st century by an unnamed Slayer and her friends, and the Watchers' Council has descended into a group of crazed fanatics. The vampires however, now dubbed lurks, have returned and haunt the city. ..."]

hmm, thats at odds with what i know...

check the details again because according to various sources on the net, Fray took place in the 21st century...

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fray

i'm adding a hundred odd years of demons and violence there with an epic battle set in 2143, i should have explained more about Faith's mindset there... as she now understands that winning the battle for good is possible, she sees it as it can be done... so it 'could happen in her lifetime', not 'will happen in her lifetime'

M

We like! The banter between Faith and Xander is excellent. The idea of a ship that big... More? Please?

Oh hell can't wait for you to update this. Blown away how well the characters came across. Your writing style adds a vividness to the story that is equal to your skill in the fan-art you do.

Wispr

wow... thanks...

i've just actually written up a 17,000 word 'plan' on individual chapters and story arcs that i plan on doing with this fic... i've sent it over to Siege for him to take a look at lol

i'm really happy so many people seem to be enjoying this fic :D

M

Awesome! Sorry, I had to get that out of my system. I'm a dedicated Trekkie and I am loving this story. It will be interesting to see where this goes. How about a little hand-to-hand between Faith and B'Lanna(? spelling ?)? Of course Xander and Tom should hit it off. They have the same sense of humour. Keep up the good work and I look forward to more. (From this one and your others.)

Glad you like it lol

now to answer your questions, in order...

1. no, sadly there won't be any Faith / B'Elanna action... the main storyarc (for the next 3 stories in the series anyway lol) is going to be centered around Enterprise (NX Class) and the Temporal Cold War

2. Yeah... Xander and Tom are perfect... but i'll be coming back to Voyager in the future lol

M

I am already looking forward to read any new chapters you might get inspired to write.

::Feeds the plot bunny::

glad you like it :D

more should be up in the next day or so...

M

Excellent work. I like it!

thanks :p

M

I cant wait to see where you take this..
I mean they really left a large opening with the time ships and the temporal cold war..
Hehe... Evil thought..
Your timeship encounters the T.A.R.D.I.S. and the Doctor...
8-D

oh god no...

i'm having enough trouble keeping the timelines straight as it is, i don't need to throw in more time lords there lol

M

This is a good story despite the problems with the mixed up centuries and the fact Daniels is from the 31st century and the enterprise J from the 26th but given the mix-ups the professional screen writers make in star trek i think i can forgive you.

yup... but i plan on writing that in as well...

i will be adding more details about Daniels confusing timeline as time goes on, but he is from the 31st century and i'll be sticking with that while i explain what he's doing on a 26th century timeship...

i have a plan, trust me lol

M

Being a Star Trek fan from WAY BACK (used to watch TOS when it was on) I am LOVING this tale! Seeing some familiar faces brings a big smile to my face. Now, after Voyager is repaired and on its way, first thing to do is figure out just HOW the FRACK to take care of this temporal torpedo that the Suliban unleashed. Once that is done, then the timelines can be reset and Xander and Faith can go back to doing what they were doing: Protecting the Hellmouth! Although, I think Seven of Nine might want to offer some material that might be of help in the battle, if I know this former drone.

roflol... a temporal torpedo is a hell of a thing to undo... as the crew of the Enterprise (several versions through the fic series) will find out...

as for protecting the hellmouth... that might not actually be needed anymore...

you'll find out more as the story goes on lol

glad you're enjoying it

M

I'm still getting over the 'shock' of trying to delete all the Scoobies' pop-culture references to Star Trek (including specific references to "Q" from TNG and "T'Pol" from 'Enterprise') in canon. However, when I can put aside my instinctive reaction that, "Hey, Xander would know all this...!", I'm finding the story very enjoyable.

Do try to keep the centuries straight, though -- you have Seven of Nine saying "23rd" when she means "24th" at one point, in addition to the problems noted earlier.