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MelbaReview:
This was a great start to what could be an awesome story. I hope you decide to add to this.
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Melba] • Date [21 May 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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AonGealachReview:
Please tell me this was a prolouge and the rest is coming? I really love this idea and I hope you plan on writing more because it sounds awesome!!!
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AonGealach] • Date [19 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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LordCorwinReview:
A definate call for MORE!
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LordCorwin] • Date [19 May 08] • Not Rated
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ZeeValentineReview:
sweeeet......its different and interesting. make me want to read more....so add..add....add....oh, 1 more thing that a great cliif-end you got right there..good work and keep it up
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ZeeValentine] • Date [19 May 08] • Not Rated
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nightslayerReview:
intresting
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nightslayer] • Date [19 May 08] • Not Rated
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kimccReview:
Ouch. Poor Xander.
Nice set up though.
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kimcc] • Date [18 May 08] • Not Rated
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DennSedaiReview:
*cackles in glee* Oh damn, I so didn't see that last part coming. rotflmao... Ok, I gotta do it even though I'll hate myself. Please, please, please more. *begging on bent knee* I'll even ship you some goodies from where I work The most evil, but delicious place on earth. Godiva.
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DennSedai] • Date [18 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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plutofigaroReview:
OMG!!! You have got to give us more of this story. Please!!!!
Review By [
plutofigaro] • Date [18 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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mrpageReview:
Ooooooh! Loved it! More soon?
Review By [
mrpage] • Date [18 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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SusanAnthonyReview:
This is a very interesting beginning! I would love to see mjore of this story.
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SusanAnthony] • Date [18 May 08] • Not Rated
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RavynJensenReview:
I know you only wrote this to placate your muse, but I think there's great potential here and if you do continue it, well, I look forward to reading more.
Review By [
RavynJensen] • Date [18 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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SeekerSidheReview:
Very interesting. Are you going to be continuing with this story line?
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SeekerSidhe] • Date [18 May 08] • Not Rated
