:-D

nice

Thank you for reloading the fic so that it was readable. I amenjoying this and I like how everyone is watching out for Xander, even those that don't realize they are doing so.


Thanks
Calia

Could you please reload this chapter? Their are strange characters in the fic and it is hard to read.


Thanks
Calia

Here it is fixed! Thanks for spotting that for my!

Love this. Looking forward to the next bit. Please update soon.

"The thought of of Danny having a fan club that did not involve the nurses in the infirmary was an odd one."

I love that line!

The Gods of Twighlight a.k.a. the Greek gods. BuffyVerse, Harry Potter, and Stargate. That is a crossover that I haven't seen before. I love the Xander stories. And getting SG1 to believe anything non-science based is always fun. This story looks like it will be a lot of fun.

{snicker} Oy vay. Poor Xander. I'm glad the error on Buffy and Willow's part left him with his adult memories since that's going to allow him to see "Auntie Kate" for what she really is and give him a chance to avoid Voldemort. When you get the story finished, you might want to find a beta reader to polish the chapters for re-posting 'cause you've got some problems, and the story reads very roughly because of them. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

Ok you are the second person to say the story comes out rough. The thing is I do have a beta reader. (2 in fact) Can one of you tell what you find as problems and is making it rough. Is the way I have the two gods pop up making seem rough. I know that I do not go in to detail about them but I want to keep them a mystery and work with their character. Am I not explaining them enough? Or am just not getting some thing else right?

good

cool

I'll reserve judgement, until I've read a few more chapters ... NITS: a bit convoluted .. might want to clean things up a bit ...

How do you mean clean things up. Is there something that seems rough in one area or is it something in general that does not seem clear. I tried my best to keep the switches in place and view clear. If that is what needs cleaning feel free to give me some ideas to help. Thank you for your opinion.