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allisonreeveReview:
love it love it please update.
love the nmaes for the babies.
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allisonreeve] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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nicowaReview:
I'd read it! As long as it wasn't too fluffy etc. I would so love it!
I loved this one, and the lovely description of the babies! Plus Faith/Harry? gotta be sexy!
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nicowa] • Date [23 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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laoshiReview:
There's definitely a market for an angsty Faith/Harry relationship. I'll hope they get back together for the entire story and you come up with circumstances that prevent it until my heart shatters into a thousand pieces and I never believe in love again. Deal?
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laoshi] • Date [18 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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janeaverageReview:
I am always good for more Parent Trap Challenge fic, and Harry/Faith suits it admirably, I think. It's sad, but it's just like Faith not to realize that Harry's, in his own way, pretty old and bad and dirty and Slytherin himself. And running from problems is, unfortunately, what she knows best.
Also, just the mental image of two kids named for Angel and Sirius getting together... *dies* now that's an entertaining disaster waiting to happen xD
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janeaverage] • Date [11 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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AvaReview:
This was lovely. I'm not a huge fan of nice and neat, happy endings and this fit that bill nicely. *applauds* Well done!
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Ava] • Date [13 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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zafaranReview:
Oh, yes. I'd love to see more of this in a sequel that gives us the back story, and what happens in the future. The fact that she emphasizes Ron's comment about her being too *Slytherin* implies a wealth of nastiness considering Ron's usual prejudice behavior. What did Ron and the others do to drive her off? Faith is still sorta fragile in some ways because her self-esteem and confidence are pretty much zilch, so there are chinks in her armor where they could easily stab her in the back. More, pretty please? I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
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zafaran] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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OrangesRcoolReview:
*sniff* That was just wonderful. And you really captured Faith as to what she'll do when she's too happy.
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OrangesRcool] • Date [17 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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DemonChildeKyraReview:
Oooo, I Like!!!! A Faith/Harry Parent Trap Challenge Rsponse...I definietly hope to see more!
~ Kyra
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DemonChildeKyra] • Date [11 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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CustomeHeroineReview:
I'm really liking this story. I never would have thought the Parent trap could be fit for a Buffy/HP story. Good job. I'm interested to see more. So please update!
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CustomeHeroine] • Date [9 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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athenethegoddessReview:
mucho interested...
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athenethegoddess] • Date [5 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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DamiaReview:
This was awesome. I loved it, and not just because I am such a big Faith fan. I usually don't like her with Harry, but I think this one works, or at least seems to. Can't wait to see more.
- D
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Damia] • Date [4 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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EllandrahSylverReview:
Oh my GOD! Can I borrow this as the intro for a Parent Trap Challenge Respionse? The challenge is old as hell, but this is a perfect prologue setup! Pretty please? You made me cry!
Comments from author:
That's actually the reason I wrote it, but now I think that it's a little off. Yes, you can borrow it but be warned that I am planning on doing my own version of 'Faith and Harry's Twins Do the Parent Trap Thing'.
Danke
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EllandrahSylver] • Date [2 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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AshStormReview:
You've got me here!
I'd love to see more of this. It's wonderfully written,and there's so much more that can be done with the plot line.
I'm really hoping you'll continue with this.
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AshStorm] • Date [2 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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SevenMagicReview:
So Ron doesn't like Faith much, does he? His calling someone Slytherin, especially someone who didn't even go to Hogwarts, is not a light insult. It seems like it would only be a small step further for him to call someone a deatheater.
And you must be adjusting timelines a bit if Faith is too old for Harry, or are you one of those who believes that Faith is older than Buffy? (I can't see that myself, but to each their own.) Does everyone from the HP world know Faith's history? I can't decide if I think she would be likely to "spill her guts" to them all or not. Her thinking that her secret had been found out would be a good explanation for why she is running away at this point, and it would be very sad if she had been mistaken in her belief. Or maybe it was just Ron who found out and Harry still knows nothing about it? There's too much that we don't know for you to just leave this plot-line hanging.
I definitely vote for more of this story. Your setup is especially interesting to me since my oldest son is named Liam, I have twin boys (no Orion here though), and I have always (for some reason) identified well with Faith. Please do continue.
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SevenMagic] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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LupoReview:
Nice lead in. I would love to see more. What finally caught up to Faith that would cause her to leave after being married so long she has children old enough to talk? Did she drop out of the muggle world and the Council caught up to her in the wizarding world? With the warped and creaking boards it sounds like her and Harry are living at Grimmauld Place. Is Sirius still dead and Harry inherited the house? Why would Faith only take one of the twins? If she had to leave to protect Harry shouldn't she have left both babies also? Faith never seemed to be one to run away from a fight, is she only leaving to go on the attack of whoever or whatever is threatening her and her family?
So many questions, so little time.........
Please continue.
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Lupo] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]