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AvaReview:
This was lovely. I'm not a huge fan of nice and neat, happy endings and this fit that bill nicely. *applauds* Well done!
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Ava] • Date [13 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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zafaranReview:
Oh, yes. I'd love to see more of this in a sequel that gives us the back story, and what happens in the future. The fact that she emphasizes Ron's comment about her being too *Slytherin* implies a wealth of nastiness considering Ron's usual prejudice behavior. What did Ron and the others do to drive her off? Faith is still sorta fragile in some ways because her self-esteem and confidence are pretty much zilch, so there are chinks in her armor where they could easily stab her in the back. More, pretty please? I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
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zafaran] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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OrangesRcoolReview:
*sniff* That was just wonderful. And you really captured Faith as to what she'll do when she's too happy.
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OrangesRcool] • Date [17 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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DemonChildeKyraReview:
Oooo, I Like!!!! A Faith/Harry Parent Trap Challenge Rsponse...I definietly hope to see more!
~ Kyra
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DemonChildeKyra] • Date [11 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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CustomeHeroineReview:
I'm really liking this story. I never would have thought the Parent trap could be fit for a Buffy/HP story. Good job. I'm interested to see more. So please update!
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CustomeHeroine] • Date [9 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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athenethegoddessReview:
mucho interested...
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athenethegoddess] • Date [5 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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DamiaReview:
This was awesome. I loved it, and not just because I am such a big Faith fan. I usually don't like her with Harry, but I think this one works, or at least seems to. Can't wait to see more.
- D
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Damia] • Date [4 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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EllandrahSylverReview:
Oh my GOD! Can I borrow this as the intro for a Parent Trap Challenge Respionse? The challenge is old as hell, but this is a perfect prologue setup! Pretty please? You made me cry!
Comments from author:
That's actually the reason I wrote it, but now I think that it's a little off. Yes, you can borrow it but be warned that I am planning on doing my own version of 'Faith and Harry's Twins Do the Parent Trap Thing'.
Danke
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EllandrahSylver] • Date [2 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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AshStormReview:
You've got me here!
I'd love to see more of this. It's wonderfully written,and there's so much more that can be done with the plot line.
I'm really hoping you'll continue with this.
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AshStorm] • Date [2 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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SevenMagicReview:
So Ron doesn't like Faith much, does he? His calling someone Slytherin, especially someone who didn't even go to Hogwarts, is not a light insult. It seems like it would only be a small step further for him to call someone a deatheater.
And you must be adjusting timelines a bit if Faith is too old for Harry, or are you one of those who believes that Faith is older than Buffy? (I can't see that myself, but to each their own.) Does everyone from the HP world know Faith's history? I can't decide if I think she would be likely to "spill her guts" to them all or not. Her thinking that her secret had been found out would be a good explanation for why she is running away at this point, and it would be very sad if she had been mistaken in her belief. Or maybe it was just Ron who found out and Harry still knows nothing about it? There's too much that we don't know for you to just leave this plot-line hanging.
I definitely vote for more of this story. Your setup is especially interesting to me since my oldest son is named Liam, I have twin boys (no Orion here though), and I have always (for some reason) identified well with Faith. Please do continue.
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SevenMagic] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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LupoReview:
Nice lead in. I would love to see more. What finally caught up to Faith that would cause her to leave after being married so long she has children old enough to talk? Did she drop out of the muggle world and the Council caught up to her in the wizarding world? With the warped and creaking boards it sounds like her and Harry are living at Grimmauld Place. Is Sirius still dead and Harry inherited the house? Why would Faith only take one of the twins? If she had to leave to protect Harry shouldn't she have left both babies also? Faith never seemed to be one to run away from a fight, is she only leaving to go on the attack of whoever or whatever is threatening her and her family?
So many questions, so little time.........
Please continue.
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Lupo] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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jennzabelleReview:
Please, sir, I want some more! ;-)
I'm pretty much a sucker for Faith post-Chosen as she's struggling to make her way through family relationships, especially parenthood. I'm curious about her and Harry. Why is he too old? Are she and the Scoobies from a Scorpius-Rose-Hugo generation or is it that he's a few years older and still carries the weight of the wizarding world? I'm intrigued by the notion that Harry is too Slytherin for her - that would require some serious backup through characterization for me to believe it, but I can see it happening over the course of his life. Harry also had an abusive/neglectful home life as a child, so I think it would take amazing strides for he and Faith to make it work to the point that she'd be willing to have children. And why does she think she needs to leave to give him back the life he should have had? Did he go Muggle and meet her and she just found out he's not only a Wizard, but the saviour of the Wizarding world and feels he needs better? Why does she leave w/o a note or anything and why can't she be tracked? How powerful is Willow in opposition to the WW - is that why? - or is there a special Slayer immunity to wizarding magic? Does the addition of wizarding blood to Slayer motherhood give her boys any abilities that Robin may have missed?
Yes, please I'd like to see more of this!
Comments from author:
Ok, this has come up a couple of times in reviews, so I guess I was just too vague. FAITH is saying that SHE is 'too old, too dirty, too Slytherin' for HARRY. As in, she's not good enough for him. Capiche?
I will answer all questions in time, working on plotting out more of the sequel/prequel crap right now, thanks.
Ta
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jennzabelle] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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TakarameriReview:
You've gotten my interest. Would leave to see more!
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Takarameri] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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DragonelfReview:
You can't leave us hanging like this.
::Feeds the plot bunny::
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Dragonelf] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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BluejelloReview:
Okay, you've got my attention... ;)
Review By [
Bluejello] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Not Rated