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Review of chapter "Ch. 5" from Matriarchick

Review:

I loved this story. Child!Xander is one of my favourites. I loved all of the little details you added like the acronyms, stolen fries, etc. It was very unique. The only thing that maybe could be improved on was when both Xanders are in the same room, it's sort of hard to figure out who is talking to who. Maybe if one of them had different name that would be a little clearer (i.e. Lex, Alex, Harris). Still, great job.

Comments from author:

Wow, that's wonderful to hear. Very glad you enjoyed young Xander and his relationship with the two Spikes.

Agree that we didn't do as good a job of clarifying which Xander was speaking/acting in scenes where they were together. I think we figured that out and by the time we got to the two spikes, we were using AU!Spike, which... eh, might have detracted some, but did keep things clearer.

Thank you for you lovely and constructive comments. *Hugs*

Review By [Matriarchick] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Ch. 5" from MistressAshley

Review:

One of the best stories I've read in a long while. I can't wait to read what you come up with next.

Comments from author:

I'm thrilled by your comments ::grins:: Thank you very much. This was a joint fic with Nash. We're probably going to work on our next chapter of Time After Time next.

Review By [MistressAshley] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Ch. 5" from selana

Review:

oh, loved it - so sad sometimes and yet a happy ending.

And of course it was hot as always LOL

Comments from author:

Missed this comment before. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story ::grins::

Review By [selana] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Ch. 5" from Trix

Review:

YAY! you fixed it. I loved this. and the ending was great. Loved the alternate Buffy.

Review By [Trix] • Date [28 Jun 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Ch. 4" from Darkhime

Review:

wow!!! Love this story,,,what is Xander going to do???

Comments from author:

Yay, glad to hear you're enjoying it. Did you see the pretty story art?

Next part/final pare will be posted shortly *Nods*

Review By [Darkhime] • Date [23 Jun 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Ch. 4" from kayron

Review:

I like the story, and even though I usually go for happy endings (gotta have 'em somewhere), the relationship between Xan2 and both Spikes are interesting.

Comments from author:

I'm mostly an HEA writer, tho I do have a few sad endings (few and with warning if involves death). This one's ending should please you ::grins::

Thanks for reading and commenting, much appreciated.

Review By [kayron] • Date [22 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Ch. 4" from Trix

Review:

NO. This is sad. I feel so sorry for Xander and Spike now.

Comments from author:

Awwww... yeah, always someone to feel sorry for, isn't there? Next/final chapter in a few days :)

Review By [Trix] • Date [22 Jun 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Ch. 3" from nomadbeth

Review:

Cute and hawt. Why do I sense the impending angst of doom? :)

Comments from author:

Heee, because the angst ho in me is showing? Actually, this one is light on angst so don't overly worry :)

Review By [nomadbeth] • Date [19 Jun 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Ch. 3" from Darkhime

Review:

that was hot...can't wait for more updates

Comments from author:

Thank you :) More very soon, might even be the last part. Not sure if it will go one or two chaps more. Shortish story.

Review By [Darkhime] • Date [19 Jun 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "ch.2" from SusanAnthony

Review:

I'm glad to see more of this story!

Comments from author:

And I'm glad you're still enjoying it. It's getting written pretty fast. I think the next part will be up in about 4 days or so.

Review By [SusanAnthony] • Date [14 Jun 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from lindiel

Review:

OOO!! This looks like it's shaping up to be a great story, looking forward to more. I'm starting to really like the Spander ship, and actually, I think it was your other story, Time After Time that got me into it.

Comments from author:

Oh yay, got someone into Spander world... makes me happy ::grins::

I used to write mostly Spander. Now I'm mixing it up with cross-overs with SPN, but still a Spander-girl at heart. Of course this story is co-written with Nash, as is TAT :)

Glad you're enjoying it!

Review By [lindiel] • Date [9 Jun 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SusanAnthony

Review:

This is a very interesting beginning! I look forward to the havok of AU!Xander and Xander together. If regular Xander's girlfriend is Anya, she'll surely try to get both Xanders in her bed.

Comments from author:

Great... glad the beginning pulled you in. Child!Xan is always so much fun.

Heee, I like the idea of AuXan and Xan creating havoc, but writing them together in a scene is hard/confusing. This story will focus more on Au!Xand and Spike.

Ha ha on Anya, she SO would. Then it would be a battle between Anya and Spike...

Review By [SusanAnthony] • Date [9 Jun 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Darkhime

Review:

this story sounds interesting...can't wait for more updates

Comments from author:

Really glad you're enjoying it. I think we'll be posting a chapter every 5 - 7 days, as quickly as we can :)

Review By [Darkhime] • Date [9 Jun 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LordCorwin

Review:

I'll track this one .... Just kinda curious though -- The Xander with the eye patch is the Xander from the first part of the story -- yes? If so, you need to be a little more clear on the transition between universes. And if not so, you still need to be a LOT more clear on what's going on ..... please .. :)

Comments from author:

Both Xan's have an eyepatch.

You're right, the meeting of the two Xan's was confusing. I plan to go back and try to clarify it later this week, thanks for pointing it out.

Luckily, there won't likely be too many scenes with both Xan's in them, which should make it easier to write/be clear.

Thanks again, appreciate your taking the time to provide concrit.

*Hugs*

Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [9 Jun 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from nightslayer

Review:

i liked it, can't wait to see where you take it though

Comments from author:

Great to hear that, thank you. Hope it goes good places, lol Next part on or before the weekend.

Review By [nightslayer] • Date [9 Jun 08] • Not Rated