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betrayalReview:
Hey, just wanted to say good work so far. Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work.
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betrayal] • Date [10 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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DemonChildeKyraReview:
Very, very interesting!!!! I SO can't wait to see where this goes! More soon, please?
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DemonChildeKyra] • Date [14 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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AvaReview:
This was different. Cordy is very under used character and I'm interested to see where you go with this.
Also, I think you meant 'curb,' not 'kerb' in fourth paragraph up from the bottom.
Comments from author:
Though I may sound it, I'm not American. You'll also might have noticed that utilised had an s instead of a z. The only exception I made was that Cordelia said 'mommy' as opposed to 'mummy', because to her, that is the way she would have said it.
Thanks for checking though! It's good to know someone cares enough to bump me on such things.
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Ava] • Date [13 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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AllenPittReview:
More chapters, please! With luck it'll take the brothers a little while to find her... hopefully not until after she's met Angel at that party... I'd love to see the Winchesters meet Angel. For that matter imagine the Winchesters & Angel Investigations working together... or the W's getting the wrong idea about Angel...
Also.... is she Sam's twin? Or a bit younger? Same mother? All those good questions...
Comments from author:
Well, it starts with The Prom, which makes Cordy eighteen, and is between In My Time of Dying and Everybody Loves a Clown for Supernatural, which would make Sam twenty-three(ish).
And it's a different mother, which was explained vaguely during Cordelia's rant. Cordy's mum is always going to be Cordy's mum, just not a very good one, it appears.
Take a while to find her? Now that's an entirely different track to what I was taking. But then, I couldn't get the idea out of my head that Graduation would be that little bit better if it were Winchesterfied. Though, I always planned to have her end up in L.A, at least for a little bit. (I always try to keep to that canon, lest it shoot me)
Hmm, I'll have to think on this. *ponders*
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AllenPitt] • Date [13 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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kribbyReview:
Woah! Great idea!
This is a really nice little fic!!!
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kribby] • Date [13 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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MiekaReview:
ooh More please!!!
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Mieka] • Date [13 Jun 08] • Not Rated