Review of chapter "New friend, Hailey" from
RevDorothyLReview:
These stories are really sweet! Thanks for the 'lighter' side of Xander and Chris and growing up, before the NID introduced so much human-generated horridness for the family!
Review By [
RevDorothyL] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New friend, Hailey" from
smolderReview:
Awwwww! That was so adoreable. I love that your doing the normal growing up stuff along with the supernatural stuff. Great chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
growing up with the supernatural; could there be anything more fun? ;)
glad you liked it
Review By [
smolder] • Date [7 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New friend, Hailey" from
DragonelfReview:
::Feeds the plot bunny::
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St Jerome - the patron saint of librarians and
scholars. St. Jerome is probably the correct
saint to pray to when your computer seems to
have evaporated a 25,000-word manuscript.
- Unknown
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Comments from author:
::plot bunny eats::
thanks
Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [2 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Demons and Flowers *Rated FR18 for violence*" from
smolderReview:
I just read through all of the drabbles and there all really good.
I love Grandpa Giles and Babbysitter Clem. So cute.
Comments from author:
glad you liked them
at least doesn't play baby poker O.o
thanks for the review!
Review By [
smolder] • Date [5 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Demons and Flowers *Rated FR18 for violence*" from
SolReview:
LOL Flowers I bet she'll always keep those in the house. The died from allergies. Well all cures can be found in nature, that saying nature cures all ails apparently applies to demons to.
Comments from author:
certainly does ;0)
'Flowers, the cure for what ails you'
thanks for taking the time to review!
Review By [
Sol] • Date [27 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Lesson" from
DragonelfReview:
::Feeds the plot bunny::
Comments from author:
::plotbunny munches::
Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [24 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Lesson" from
BillieBogReview:
Love the kid. Really enjoying the series. Thanks so much.
BB
Comments from author:
thanks!
glad you're enjoying it
Review By [
BillieBog] • Date [23 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hook, Line and Stinker" from
ScrappychicReview:
Great story so far and I'd love to read more, but I also want to mention the 6 inch leg thing...
I just double checked on my daughter who, admittedly is two, not 18 months and is also a bit tall for her age, but her inseam is 11 inches right now, if you measure her leg to her hip it's around 17 inches... When she was born she was nearly 21 inches long and her legs take up a good 1/3 of the body, so her legs at BIRTH would have been 6 or 7 inches long.
It doesn't really matter, but I just thought I'd mention it.
Either way, great story! I hope to read more of these to suppliment the time between Sudden Changes postings. *hint hint*
Comments from author:
thanks!
measurements corrected (:
i'm about halfway through the next chapter of SD and i've almost finished the next ficlet for this story.
Review By [
Scrappychic] • Date [20 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Dance" from
BillieBogReview:
These are fun, but I really, really, really, please, please, please want to hear what happens next.
Thanks so much
Billie
Comments from author:
thanks!
Review By [
BillieBog] • Date [19 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hook, Line and Stinker" from
irialonsoReview:
That's a really cute story
Comments from author:
thanks!
Review By [
irialonso] • Date [16 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hook, Line and Stinker" from
starchildReview:
I like this story and "Sudden Changes" but I don't usually do reviews because I suck like that, however I had to point out something that really made me laugh:
"Chris ran to his room as fast as his six-inch legs would allow him to."
The mental image of an eighteen month old with six-inch legs was not something I was prepared for. Other than that, I'm really looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
heh, i thought of Chris like a rather small child; i don't know if 18 month olds are usally that small at that age but i do know this little girl from a karate group i go to who is six years old but she's really tiny and looks about the average 2 or 3 yr old height- she's so cute!
anyway, thanks for reviewing; the next chapter should be up soon
Review By [
starchild] • Date [15 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hook, Line and Stinker" from
TonyTheJewReview:
nice little story so far. Can you post a link for 'Sudden Changes' in here.
keep up the good work
Comments from author:
thanks!
yup, the links up; but only as an address- i tried making a hyperlink but for some reason it makes the ENTIRE chapter italic, very strange.
the next one will be up soon (:
Review By [
TonyTheJew] • Date [15 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]