Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
DuskieReview:
Ummm, that was fun.
I really want you to continue, morbid curiosity on whether they'll kill each other.
I'm not sure I can think of a more explosive...ehr.. bickery(is that a word)/ snippy combination.
How do they know it's a box?
Comments from author:
All excellent points/questions, sadly I was under the influence of germs at the time and it appears they kidnapped the relevant muse upon eviction!
PS I'm going to have to nick the word bickery and claim it as my own :0)
Review By [
Duskie] • Date [4 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
netteReview:
I like it and just the thought of these particular characters locked in a box together should make someone want to make a story as to how they got in there and how they will get out. Unfortunately i'm not good at writing so I can't do it. Please someone pick up this idea and go with it.
Think of the possibilities!
Comments from author:
Oh I agree, sadly nowt happening on my end but you never know someone somewhere might be warped enough to run with it ;0)
Review By [
nette] • Date [10 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
JediKnightReview:
I'm not sure what to make of this.
Comments from author:
Nor was I! :0)
Review By [
JediKnight] • Date [5 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
linkReview:
I'm sure they're going to kill each other any minute now. Gibbs and Jack was not known for their patient. In fact I think they're going to kill Doctor first :)
Comments from author:
Hmmmm tag teaming may be their only chance ;0)
Review By [
link] • Date [24 Jun 08] • Not Rated
