Oh, now this is interesting! I like that you're concentrating on the lesser characters rather than the main cast. And you Drusilla is exquisitely mad and evil.

Well. Crazy madwoman meets crazy vampwoman. No wonder Bellatrix is interested. I love the fact Luna Lovegood is in the thick of it, and her voice is coming through clearly. Can't wait for the next update!

Very nice story, well written with good characterisation and you're not rushing it at all. Excellent.

wow Dru the mad has come to the game (and I love the way you show us just how crazy Dru really is) this is getting better and better. so which slayers are going to find Luna? Maybe Kennedy? and how dose the wizarding world view gay's? waiting for the next ch. with baited breath!!!!!!!

*Hugs&Kisses*

Excellent so far. Points to you for:

Characters - you clearly know the HP characters and, so far, are writing them in, well, character.

Perspective - one of the most telling characteristics of good writing is a consistent and well-chosen point of view, and you've nailed it.

Dialog - well done.

I"m eager for more. I'd suggest keeping an eye out for pomposity; you're clearly ambitious with this work, and it's going well so far, but you're kind of heading in that direction, if you see what I mean.

This is really well-written and intriguing so far. You have the voices down very well. I can't wait to read more and see where it's going!

I remarkable story, it's really beautifully written.

Luna as a slayer is something I don't think I've ever seen before, but it's a great idea.

I'm really looking forward to seeing how this continues.

Thank you for the update. I was a little disappointed that not much of the chapter focused on Luna. But with further updates, that will pass ;) I look forward to more.

Okay... this isn't the first Luna the Vampire Slayer story I've read but unlike the other one (that I remember being extremely Mary-Sueish) yours at least makes sense and is true to the HP characters.

It is off to an interesting start. And finally a use for those darn centaurs.

I usually can't stand HP/Buffy crossovers, but yours is fantastically well written, and I love how it focuses on Nev, Luna and Gin instead of Harry (whom i'm quite sick of, thank you).

Please write more. Your voices for all the characters are fantastic. Ginny sounds both real and like the Ginny of the books, which is better than 99% of HP fanfics out there already. And your Luna is wonderful.

Nicely written, looking forward to the next part.

Very odd dreams. I really haven't seen a "Luna as Slayer" fic before. I look forward to reading more.

I enjoyed this will you be continuing?

Ooh! Interesting! Slayer!Luna sounds like a fun Luna. :)
At first I thought you were having her be Buffy for whatever reason, but now I'm assuming she's just one of the more psychic slayers?
Can't wait to see where you take this!

Luna as a slayer is a terrifying thought. Could the sudden calling of all those slayers all over the world be related to the emergency meeting? Ironic, if so...