Great story!

I just read this whole story over the course of a few days and loved it. You have all of the Atlantis voices down and you do a great Dawn, too.

Liked it? Hun, I loved it.

Much to my surprise I have enjoyed this story. Normally the weaving of another character into the original plot bores me but Dawns characterization and the interaction with Ronan in particular was very well done and kept my interest. I am looking forward to the sequel.

Thanks for sharing Richard3116

Awesome story

Good ending, it just seemed appropriate.

Really nice to see it end on a high note!

Congratulations on finishing the story! You did a great job -I've been reading a chapter or two each day and it's something I've come to look forward to.

Thanks for sharing this! I'll be reading your next story!

This was an excellent adventure. Thank you.

Thanks for a well thought out story that got completed!

Amazing job! What a wonderful story, I can't wait to read the rest of the series!

awesome, awesome, awesome!!!!

cant wait for the next one. this story is one of the best i have read in a long time. you got more reviews out of me than anyone every has. some times i will think 'oh ill review later' but this story inspired me to tell you how i felt.

i liked the character's character. all of them seemed well thought out and you explained some of the shows emotional stuff. hope john and tayla get togather. is tayla pregnant? anyway put the nest story up soon and update regularly.

Thanks for a real page turner. Due to you fast updates no attention deficit for me at all.
Lovely all together.

Fantastic story. I know only the vaguest bits of SGA but you made the world come alive. I read this in almost one sitting and am so happy to hear there will be another part.

Thanks so much for writing this and sharing.

That was a great ending :) Thanks for writing this!

Later and Love
Bunney

This is fantastic and is now definitely one of my all-time favorites. You did great job and I'm so excited to read the sequel.