Review of chapter "The Beginning" from
CPTSkipReview:
Very interesting start. I thought the NCIS guys took the whole story too quickly as fact. But maybe Abbie has been talking. Lol! Is Abbie going to be a Slayer? That would also be ... interesting. Lol!
Comments from author:
Maybe they didn't. Maybe they think she's a crazy person. Wasn't much reaction there.
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CPTSkip] • Date [20 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Beginning" from
DreamweaverReview:
No relation to Ducky? If there IS a relation between this "Mrs. Mallard" and our team Forensics expert, why would they pick up Tony and on Ducky at the same time?
Comments from author:
Maybe even Willow couldn't get into the personnel files. It was mentioned that they were working off of Tony's activity report...
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Dreamweaver] • Date [20 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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cwolfReview:
well, if nothing else she picked some open minded people. They're at least trained to listen first then express an opinion. That's more than buffy and crew gets in most stories on tth
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cwolf] • Date [20 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Beginning" from
vogonguardReview:
Why in the sacred name of Florence Foster Jenkins did Willow have to give them the entire history of the Watchers? All she had to say was 'I belong to an organisation that is paying a pension to someone we know nothing about. You appear to know where she is. Can you help us?' The truth could have emerged naturally later.
Comments from author:
Willow babble. If it was anybody else other than Willow (Xander, for example) then yeah.
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vogonguard] • Date [20 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Beginning" from
SulienReview:
Your story really drew me in and I enjoyed reading what you have here. Thanks for sharing this, I look forward to reading more when you get a chance to write and post. :)
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Sulien] • Date [20 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Beginning" from
AriaDragoncrestReview:
Wonderful chapter
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AriaDragoncrest] • Date [20 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Beginning" from
MiekaReview:
more please!! so glad you're continuing this one :)
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Mieka] • Date [20 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Beginning" from
RachelKReview:
Interesting and rather forthright. But sometimes, truth - even abridged truth is the way to go.
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RachelK] • Date [20 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gibbs' Office" from
DaveTurnerReview:
This is rather good, I hope you keep going with it, I'm putting it on 'track'.
all the best,
DaveT.
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DaveTurner] • Date [19 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gibbs' Office" from
AriaDragoncrestReview:
Ack! Don't leave it there! Very good chapter.
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AriaDragoncrest] • Date [19 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gibbs' Office" from
SpinelessPunsterReview:
Being an avid and rabid NCIS fan, and having seen every episode at least twice (except the one 2 weeks ago where my Tivo fritzed!!), I will give my critical review:
Stonking great.
And way too short-Damn you to the special Hell!
more,
soonish.
please {sniff}
Wait too log and Abs will come and plead at you.
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SpinelessPunster] • Date [18 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gibbs' Office" from
RachelKReview:
I'm enjoying this story. Thanks for sharing.
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RachelK] • Date [18 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gibbs' Office" from
purrfusReview:
It could explain so many things...
Gibbs office was perfect, and one of the evilest cliffies I've see in a while.
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purrfus] • Date [18 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "McGeeking" from
winnieReview:
What a terrible place to leave us.
Lets see some updating, I want more, more...
Thank you for your work.
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winnie] • Date [17 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "McGeeking" from
cflatReview:
Interesting idea. Although, according to IMDB, Mrs. Mallard's first name is Victoria, not Vanessa.
Review By [
cflat] • Date [7 Oct 08] • Not Rated
