Review of chapter "Chapter nine" from
springReview:
Oh wow. I love this wonderful fic. I love how Willow went from fearing Teil'c to running to him for comfort along with Jack whom she trusted very quickly I hope that the memories that come in the future start to be happy one's soon. Again I love this wonderful fic and hope that you are able to update again as soon as possible.
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spring] • Date [13 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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oldgirllostReview:
I super really want more please!
Thanks for what you have already given I have enjoyed it greatly.
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oldgirllost] • Date [11 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter nine" from
lacieReview:
Great!! I can't wait for you to get to the next chpt.
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lacie] • Date [29 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter nine" from
PsychoWingReview:
Good story. Pretty amusing at parts. I think you're doing a good job of keeping everyone in character.
BTW, Hammond with hair is something that I'm having trouble picturing, but the initial reaction was funny.
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PsychoWing] • Date [19 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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MirandaReview:
ohhh please update soon!!
Comments from author:
(: sure can-do, i don't have a lot of time for fic because of college work but it'll be updated soon, just not as much as it has been in the last few months.
Review By [
Miranda] • Date [12 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter nine" from
LMiCReview:
I'm enjoying this story very much. Thanks for taking the time to share it.
Comments from author:
glad you're liking it (:
thanks for the review!
Review By [
LMiC] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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smolderReview:
Just read through a bunch of chapters. Very very good. I love your dialouge. "Damn…delicious candy!" actually made me laugh out loud.
Comments from author:
thanks!
Review By [
smolder] • Date [7 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter nine" from
VampswitchReview:
Oh, you have me crying again! You mean author you!...
This was such a great chapter. I absolutely loved the way Teal'c and Jack were around Willow and Xander.
My favourite quotes of this chap?
If you attempt to harm these children, I will dismember you.
and
General, permission to shoot them.
Ok, not exactly like you wrote it, but I loved those two sentences.
But now we may have a problem here. Jack just promised both Xander and Willow that they would stay with him and his team and even though I think there would be nothing greater than this, it will hardly be possible, will it?
Two children really cannot stay on a base and I don't think that their tight world-saving schedule would allow for anyone of SG1 to adopt them. Well, Jack could retire again...
And now Willow is remembering Warrens death. You know, I always thought he got what he deserved. I even cheered for Willow when she chased him through the forest. Just after killing Warren did she go a little too far. But I'm chalking that up to the magic that had gotten a hold on her.
two six year olds with the memories of two 22 year olds. Oh please let them stay kids and have a better future. preferably with SG1.
Hope you update soon. Its a wonderful story.
Comments from author:
thank you!
yeah, i kinda figured that SG1 wouldn't be able to care for Willow and Xander full- or even part- time; but i got a way around that ;)
don't worry i'm not planning on turning them back- i always though they both deserved better parents; and better lives in general.
i'm glad you like this story
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Vampswitch] • Date [1 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ScrappychicReview:
I seriously love this story. Little Willow and Little Xander are so darned cute it makes my teeth hurt. :)
The only thing I'd suggest is more screen time with Daniel and the kids. Maybe I'm forgetting since it's been a while since I read many of the chapters, but I don't think they've had much one-on-one time so far. So far it seems to have mainly been whole group scenes or focused on Teal'c and/or Jack. Though I can hardly blame you with Jack, he is just a big kid anyway. But I'd love to see Lil Willow blow Daniel's mind with some reference to something no 6 year old should know. (like languages)
It looks promising for the Willow/Sam scene being set up for the past few Chapters, but Daniel seems to have been left out in the cold when it comes to bonding with the kids. You think with his experience of being alone without any family as a child, (being in the foster homes) he'd be one of the first ones to jump on the "lets make the kids feel welcome and included" bandwagon.
Just my 2 cents worth. But either way, you're still doing a great job.
Comments from author:
thanks!
i know what you mean, for some reason- i don't know why- i seem to be leaving Daniel and Sam out
they'll definitely be in the next chapter (:
glad you're enjoying the story
Review By [
Scrappychic] • Date [29 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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DKoeppReview:
Great Story so far. Looking forward to further updates.
Comments from author:
thank you!
glad you like it
Review By [
DKoepp] • Date [29 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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BobbokyReview:
I am waiting for Xander and Willow to be reintroduced to snoopy and his infamous dance
Comments from author:
;)
snoopy will be coming soon
thanks for the review!
Review By [
Bobboky] • Date [29 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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ICEReview:
If I actually was a person that cooed at cute things, this chapter would defiantly get a coo. Since i don't, it won't, but you will get a very good job. It *was* cute.
Comments from author:
;)
i aim to make people coo...well actually i don't but it's still cool
thanks for the review!
Review By [
ICE] • Date [29 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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bluealienessReview:
oooh! great update. nice bonding between the kids and jack and T. :D
Comments from author:
thanks!
glad you liked it
Review By [
bluealieness] • Date [29 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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kyzhartReview:
Wonderful. Enjoying every word.
Comments from author:
thank you!
Review By [
kyzhart] • Date [28 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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NaiveGhostReview:
I can't wait to find out if they are going to stay little kids and/or who will be their guardians.
Keep writing!
;-)
Comments from author:
we'll have to wait 'n' see ;p
thanks for the review!
Review By [
NaiveGhost] • Date [28 Aug 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]