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spikeismineReview:
Very well writter, I love the plot and the pairing you chose. I can't wait to read more so please update soon.
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spikeismine] • Date [2 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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CustomeHeroineReview:
Seems like an interesting story, keep the updates coming.
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CustomeHeroine] • Date [18 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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AllenPittReview:
Great story! Faith & Willow loose in the magical world, should be lots of fun. I sure hope they let Dawn come with them--maybe her being the Key will make a difference; in effect she has a magical core & maybe could use a wand? Has huge untapped power? (with the 'not getting a letter at age 11' thing due to not existing back then..and the monks didn't know about the magical world, so they didn't incorporate that into her background?)--
I bet any wizard who did a diagnostic on Dawn would be shocked--ie she isn't really 'there', she's an artificial construct, etc--
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AllenPitt] • Date [8 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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DamiaReview:
YAY!!!!!
I wasn't sure how much I was going to like this, but it has officially wormed itself onto my top ten list.
- D
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Damia] • Date [5 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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SusangelReview:
Sorry it took me so long to start reading this story...But now that I have I'll definitely be reading and reviewing it!XD
I just hope that you don't make Draco evil...Most of the stories I have read have both him,at least,or him and Faith evil...which pretty much sucks...
I can't wait to read some more!
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Susangel] • Date [5 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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BlackRoseReview:
"Like bippity boppity boo wands?" I smiple loved this line. Only Faith could say something like that. What away to meet the people you'll be working with. I can't wait to see what is in store next chapter.
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BlackRose] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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SkyefatherReview:
nice please another ch. soon
Hug & kisses
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Skyefather] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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supernaturalfanaticReview:
Yay, Dawn!
I knew she'd weasel her way into your heart. See, you don't hate her as much! ;)
Here's hoping Willow doesn't get too much of a magical high when stepping inside the wizarding world, y'know!
And here's also hoping Faith doesn't embarrass Ron too much so that his face matches his hair. Harry, too.
I can totally see Dawn having an instant crush on all three of them and that leads to much giggleness on my part because all three would do their best to make her stammer and such.
Oh, the possibilities!
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supernaturalfanatic] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from
supernaturalfanaticReview:
Oh Giles, such hard decisions he must face as the leader of the entire Council and such. Here's hoping he doesn't fudge this up with Willow and Faith. That would be very, very bad. Awaiting chapter two!
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supernaturalfanatic] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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TamoraCardboardMoonReview:
The feminine of "minister" can be either "ministra" or "ministrae". :)
I think you need a beta - just for some grammar errors and general dialect help. But all in all, I'm liking this story very much so far. Faith is one of my favorite characters, so I'm excited. :)
Update soon!
-Tamora, the Cardboard Moon
Comments from author:
thanks for that and i actually did have someone look this first part over... i dunno, i just have badluck with betas, tried that and it didn't work out... sad, i know, but its ok i'm in it for the fun of writing and if i get corrected on something i'll just change it :0)
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TamoraCardboardMoon] • Date [30 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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BlackRoseReview:
Draco/Faith is one of my favorite HP/Buffy crossover pairings and there are just not enough. Ooh I can't wait to see what Giles big secret is.
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BlackRose] • Date [30 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from
DamiaReview:
*singsong voice* LoVe It!!!
- D
Comments from author:
thanks! :0)
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Damia] • Date [30 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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SkyefatherReview:
Excellent!!!! loving the character interplay so far. is this going to be a reformed Draco/faith Pairing or A Harry/faith Pairing ?can't wait till the update
*feeds the plot bunny*
*pets the plot bunny, good plot bunny's*
*hugs & kisses*
Comments from author:
4sure FaithDraco.... but Willow and Harry are still up in the air, prob some OC's ;0)
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Skyefather] • Date [30 Jun 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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McspenderReview:
Erhm, seems there's gonna be blood, a looot of blood=D!!.
Cool fic!.
See ya!
ETA: Uuhmm...Weeell, I kinda had 2 diferent fics opened at the same time, in diferent windows and...kinda mixed up the reviews, sorry won't happen again =).
Comments from author:
so i got a review in my hotmail, which was totally different that what i'm seeing on here... i'm hoping this is it cause there is the one i got in hotmail:
There's no Revenge. There's no Hate... only Justice, only Punishment.
Dark, pretty dark, considering that Castle is one of the darkest characters in the Marvel roster; by the way, the God of Punishment is your creation?.
See ya!!.
i was like.... HUH?!?! lol
thanks for the review! :0)
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Mcspender] • Date [30 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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cflatReview:
Really interesting idea. I'll be interested to see where this goes! How many years in here has it been since Voldemort was killed?
Comments from author:
haven't decided yet, will be said in next chapter
Review By [
cflat] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Not Rated