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Review of chapter "Betrayal" from (2007%20Donor)

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Great start so far! Very interesting. I can't wait for Chosen Two to be finished now because I love that story too and I can't wait for more of this one ;)

Review By [ (2007%20Donor)

Fritolays] • Date [19 Aug 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Betrayal" from Zoi

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I like the start so far and I'm so interested to see whats going to happen. Buffy/Voldy pairing...Yuck, but I will endure because even though I have only read one chapter I know this story will be good.

Review By [Zoi] • Date [21 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Betrayal" from spring

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Wow! This is wonderful. I love the fact that both Draco and Narcissa had it out with Lucius. I am very very eager to read more of this wonderful fic so please update again soon

Review By [spring] • Date [7 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Betrayal" from Amai

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I'm a little upset to see that it's listed as complete. It's an interesting idea, but not fully explored. And I agree that you need more time to developer her into a Buffy character rather than a character with the name Buffy. I found the ending a little... unfinished.

Just something to think about.

Comments from author:

Oops, I didn't realize that it was listed under completed! This is definitely not finished! >_<

Thanks for the review and pointing that out for me!

Review By [Amai] • Date [5 Jul 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Betrayal" from macalaarmstrong

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I truly love your writing it is so vivid and it invokes a lot of emotions. I love this story plot and I don't think I have ever read anything like it before. What a bastard father that is selling his own daughter as a sex slave. Is she still going to go to Hogwarts when school starts. Keep up the great work and update soon. Have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.

Comments from author:

Thanks so much! I know, Lucius is sort of a bastard, isn't he? She won't be going back to Hogwarts, but not to fret. More characters will be making their way into future chapters!

Review By [macalaarmstrong] • Date [4 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Betrayal" from TheEmpressOfJohoho

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I like it, please update xD

Review By [TheEmpressOfJohoho] • Date [3 Jul 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Betrayal" from GothTroubleMaker

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wow. This is pretty good.

Review By [GothTroubleMaker] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Betrayal" from Bumblebee

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I really love how you have started this fic please update soon! :)
I can see Buffy in the character in this fic with her strength and need to protect her family
Good job!

Review By [Bumblebee] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Betrayal" from ChloeWinchester

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That was really good, I really enjoyed that. I do hope you continue this story.

Review By [ChloeWinchester] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Betrayal" from djhardim

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So, Narcissa goes to the current head of the Black family and gets a divorce.
Draco Malfoy becomes Draco Black.

Review By [djhardim] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Betrayal" from Wise

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Not to jump on you here, but if the only thing she's got in common with Buffy is her name, in what sense is she Buffy? How is this not a Harry Potter fic starring an original character who happens to be named 'Buffy?'

Comments from author:

Well, it's only the first chapter, so I haven't been able to put in a lot of the unique qualities that we know and love. Also, I believe she gets called as the Slayer at 15, so keep that in mind...

Review By [Wise] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Betrayal" from Iceflame

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This would be an seed for an interesting story.

Comments from author:

Thanks! :)

Review By [Iceflame] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]