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nmcilReview:
NICE - this is a very interesting interpretation of these two great characters - Dawn and Illyria, not a relationship that I would usually consider, but you have made it really work - Excellent Short Work -
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nmcil] • Date [2 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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HeatherDeeReview:
It reads like you've captured that thousand-year-stare mentality pretty well.
Comments from author:
thank you
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HeatherDee] • Date [4 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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RabidRejectReview:
Awesome. Follow up?
Comments from author:
I wish there could be a follow-up. Dawn and Illyria are a fun pairing to consider. Not sure of my abilities though as I am in the middle of a massive WIP..
thank you so much for reviewing!
HUGS!
Athenewolfe
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RabidReject] • Date [4 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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amusewithaviewReview:
Nice. Different.
Danke
Comments from author:
thank you!
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amusewithaview] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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CPTSkipReview:
Your story is strangely beautiful. I liked it a lot. Thanks.
Comments from author:
Thank you *smiles and dances happily*
The challenge was to create a scenerio in which these two were involved together. I couldn't resist answering it. I really enjoy Dawn and the pairing just seemed so intriguing.
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CPTSkip] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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WisprReview:
Very... very good. You did a wonderful job at capturing their uniqueness of who they are.
Wispr
Comments from author:
Thank you very much! I really enjoyed the challenge of getting these two into a relationship, but very happy with the way it turned out.
Thank you so much for the review! *hugs*
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Wispr] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Not Rated