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TouchoftheWindReview:
Little Harry! Cute! Though a Little Connor would have made my day...Those two together, imagine the myscheif! LOL!
I loved this! Willow realted to Angel, she could be Aunt Willow! LOL! Update soon!
Comments from author:
I am glad you like it so far.
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TouchoftheWind] • Date [1 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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blitzgrlReview:
I have to say that this is the best story yet so far!!
Infact, there isn't many stories of Angel featuring Harry Potter in his younger years, plus the fact that Angel adopting Harry is pretty rare!!
Can't wait for the next chapter to be upload!!
I really do hope you're going to continue with this story :3
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you like it. I am in middle of the next chapter so it is going slowly, but I will update.
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blitzgrl] • Date [15 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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danyaelofazkabanReview:
This is slightly different from what I usually read, but it's very interesting. I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you for giving it a try. :) I am writing just slowly.
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danyaelofazkaban] • Date [11 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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christytrekkieReview:
I hope you have not given up on this story I really like it and hope to read more. the angel harry stories seem to be real good crossovers
Comments from author:
Thank you, I haven't given up it just takes me awhile to write.
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christytrekkie] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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SlytherinWereReview:
I love your story. I hope you update soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
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SlytherinWere] • Date [1 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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mayoiReview:
this is so cute!!!!
please go on
Comments from author:
Thank you.
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mayoi] • Date [1 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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mayoiReview:
come on now!
more, more, more!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you. RL kickin my butt, I keep chugging away just slowly.
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mayoi] • Date [30 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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NatalieReview:
I really like this story. It's funny too.
Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
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Natalie] • Date [21 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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springReview:
This chapter is beyond wonderful. I love how Cordy and Buffy worked together in getting on Gunn and Wesley's case for putting those posters up (very funny btw). Please please update this wonderful fic again soon.
Comments from author:
I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
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spring] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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mithrilandtjReview:
Nice intro to the Dursleys.
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mithrilandtj] • Date [18 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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AriaDragoncrestReview:
great chapter
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading :-)
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AriaDragoncrest] • Date [18 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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BlkwomanReview:
I was so glad to see an update. Not much of a fan of the Angel/Buffy or Angel/Cordelia pairing, but you made Willow a relative. Still love it though. Dursleys deserve a smack-down. Update soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading :-)
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Blkwoman] • Date [18 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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angelkittyReview:
awwwwwwwwwwwwww harry is going to get a new mummy and daddy. i cant wait to see harry's reaction to that. hope to read more soon
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angelkitty] • Date [18 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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AngelfirenzeReview:
Huh. The genetics part is a bit confusing and I had to roll my eyes at Cordelia because I am in no way an Angel/Cordy shipper. I suppose that in this reality Connor isn't going to come into existence? *sighs* Pity -- unless he was actually conceived on Buffy's seventeenth birthday. That's been done before, but I've never seen it done badly and there's no reason why that could start being the case here.
Comments from author:
Connor may show up I haven't made up my mind yet. No he won't be Buffy's, I have just a glimmer of an Idea. Nixing the Cordy/Angel thing was pretty easy because in my mind it didn't really get going till 3 years in or there about.I'm not real sure. The one I am really wrestling with is Dawn. I never really liked her.
The Genetics are that he had 8 kids with 8 different women. At least 3 of them ended up in the Wizarding world. Then 14 or so generations allows for the lines to intermarry without it being too inbred and allows two or more lines to come back together at some point.
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Angelfirenze] • Date [13 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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AngelfirenzeReview:
Right, the idea you've had is just spectacular, but the execution has been less so. This needs a beta very badly to fix the grammatical and prose errors as well as spelling mistakes. Am I right in guessing that English isn't your first language?
Oh, well, that's okay, I suppose. I don't dislike the story, actually. I simply think it could be improved. I'm reading the second chapter at the moment and very curious as to how this will play out.
Comments from author:
I am sorry you don't like my writing. You are wrong English is my first language. No I do not have a beta but I do use spell check. I was using a voice recognition program it was coming up with some very strange ideas of what I said. I thought I caught all of them, maybe I didn't. Other than that I sometimes type the way I speak. If it is distracting to you all I can say is sorry.
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Angelfirenze] • Date [13 Aug 08] • Not Rated