Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
halfbloodpuffskinReview:
LOL nifty.
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halfbloodpuffskin] • Date [3 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
ShyBobReview:
The detective dictated into his recorder, "Apparently Mr. Smith was running to answer the telephone and slipped on a slick bit of linoleum while holding a piece of grilling apparatus."
I know people that have done stupider stuff (they just got crippled, though, not killed).
WATCH YOUR KIDS AROUND THE BARBECUE PIT! ;)
Review By [
ShyBob] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
DogfireReview:
the likely hood isnt really there but what a way to die. >^_^< really funny!
Review By [
Dogfire] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
liabilityReview:
very funny, made me laugh!
Review By [
liability] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
RiaReview:
Oh, funny! Statistically, it was bound to happen.
Review By [
Ria] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Not Rated
